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We All Fall Down: For John Hamilton

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I didn't get to enter John's contest, but I wanted to post this for him.

Like Humpty Dumpty we all fall, but faith will help us climb any wall.


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 8/23/2016
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Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 11/11/2016 2:31:00 PM

A very wise monoku, Lin. Good advice to follow for sure. Love always.

James Inman

Date: 9/21/2016 8:09:00 AM

A beautiful sentiment Lin.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 8/29/2016 1:52:00 AM

I like this one, Lin:) I couldn't enter mine too, but John liked it:)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/24/2016 12:02:00 AM

A nicely rhymed one. Hope he saw it!! GREAT message in this.

Lin Lane
Date: 8/24/2016 1:59:00 PM

Thanks so much, Andrea. John has indeed read and commented. I knew he'd appreciate it from a spiritual view.

Lynn Marie

Date: 8/23/2016 11:25:00 PM

A lovely Monoku...uplifting sentiments expressed from the heart for a dear fellow poet. A pleasure to read :-) blessings, lynn p.s. happy writing to 'Lin' from another 'lynn':-) :-) (couldn't resist)..lol :-)

Lin Lane
Date: 8/24/2016 1:58:00 PM

and a "Thank you" from this Lin to you. Nice to meet you. John is my spiritual brother and a wonderful person.

Vladislav Raven

Date: 8/23/2016 5:24:00 PM

Hi Lin, I am sure this one would have done well in the contest. It is true that we can all fall and that Faith can lift us back up and climb any wall. Faith is always the key Lin. Love your Monoku, you always do this type of write so well It is always great to see a new write from you on the soup. An excellent Monoku. Has to be a seven. Hugs....Mike. XX

Lin Lane
Date: 8/23/2016 6:49:00 PM

Thanks, Mike. Your kind words are always wonderful to read. You give me the confidence I want to give back to you. Smile.

Sandra Haight

Date: 8/23/2016 11:37:00 AM

Hi Lin, so happy to see one of your poems recently posted. Love the inspiration in the rhymed message in your Monoku! Hope all is well. Hugs, Sandra

Lin Lane
Date: 8/23/2016 11:57:00 AM

Thank you, Sandra. All is honky dory with me and hope the same goes for you. ;-)

Daniel Turner

Date: 8/23/2016 10:36:00 AM

. Attractive, smart, talented, and wise, what a winning combination you are, Lin!

Lin Lane
Date: 8/23/2016 11:56:00 AM

You're gonna make me blush, Danny. Thank you so much for your sweet words.

John Hamilton

Date: 8/23/2016 10:32:00 AM

Thanks Lin very encouraging and so true! How many times we have fallen but our faith lifts us up and we rise again to meet the next challenge! Too bad you missed out on the contest this would have placed well, difficult to squeeze in a rhyme, but you did well!All the best! Take care!

Lin Lane
Date: 8/23/2016 11:55:00 AM

Thanks, John. You must know by now that rhyming is my "thing." lol Holding on to faith...