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We All Fall Down

‘In death we all fall down' There is a hush, our own flesh Betrothed to dirt, buried in the ground Death will be our guide, turning tears into ashes dried As no one ever reads our regrets! A glossy wooden box penetrates And buries unexpressed emotions That were never meant to be found We never count the steps Between life and death! The climb was hard, but the fall Was only one way down Our name forever embedded on a cold stone slab As we are laid to rest, forever bound! 21.2.22 Contest: F Form- Free Verse Sponsor: Constance La France Word: Death.

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Date: 3/4/2022 9:48:00 AM
This is such a wonderful write, apt for the theme...Carol...Congratulations for your win in the contest...Hugs...~ Ani
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Carol Mitra
Date: 3/26/2022 12:15:00 AM
Thanks dear Ani....much love :)
Date: 2/26/2022 8:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! What a write and so true. Have a great/blessed day writing away..................
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Carol Mitra
Date: 3/26/2022 12:15:00 AM
Thanks dear Paula.....Sorry to have replied so late....as I just saw this....much love :)
Date: 2/25/2022 2:46:00 PM
Carol, congratulations on your Third Place win in my Free Verse contest with your wonderful poem ~ Constance
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Carol Mitra
Date: 2/26/2022 3:36:00 AM
Thank you Constance.......hope you are doing well....much love :)

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