We All Fall Down

‘In death we all fall down'

There is a hush, our own flesh
Betrothed to dirt, buried in the ground
Death will be our guide, turning tears 
into ashes dried
As no one ever reads our regrets!

A glossy wooden box penetrates
And buries unexpressed emotions
That were never meant to be found
We never count the steps
Between life and death!

The climb was hard, but the fall 
Was only one way down
Our name forever embedded 
on a cold stone slab
As we are laid to rest, forever bound!

21.2.22
Contest: F Form- Free Verse
Sponsor: Constance La France
Word: Death.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022


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Date: 3/4/2022 9:48:00 AM
This is such a wonderful write, apt for the theme...Carol...Congratulations for your win in the contest...Hugs...~ Ani
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Carol Mitra
Date: 3/26/2022 12:15:00 AM
Thanks dear Ani....much love :)
Date: 2/26/2022 8:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! What a write and so true. Have a great/blessed day writing away..................
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Date: 3/26/2022 12:15:00 AM
Thanks dear Paula.....Sorry to have replied so late....as I just saw this....much love :)
Date: 2/25/2022 2:46:00 PM
Carol, congratulations on your Third Place win in my Free Verse contest with your wonderful poem ~ Constance
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Date: 2/26/2022 3:36:00 AM
Thank you Constance.......hope you are doing well....much love :)
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