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We, Or Maybe W-E

We share kids. We share responsibilities. We share a house. We share a blanket, sheets, and a mattress, but w-e do not share a life together.

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Arum Dusu

Date: 7/17/2018 8:51:00 PM

Wow!... This is real. I love it.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 7/16/2018 8:34:00 AM

Very sad, but you are actually telling it like it is in many households. People stay together for many reasons except for sharing a life of love together.Great poem - well done, my friend! Pandita

Lyric Man

Date: 7/2/2018 3:49:00 PM

Hi Amy.. Welcome to Poetry Soup! You're going to love it here. Read and comment on others poets writes and they will do the same for you. Take a minute to come check out my latest write. Looking forward to reading more of your work!

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 6/24/2018 4:42:00 PM

It s a really sad and powerful write, you have said so much in just a few words and your last line says it all " but we do not share a life". A very warm welcome to you on poetrysoup, I am sure that you will enjoy your long stay here, good luck and continue to write

Lyric Man

Date: 6/24/2018 12:10:00 AM

Amy.. that was powerful and profound. Sadly, I still don't think a lot of guys would get your poem!

Elizabeth Kinch

Date: 6/23/2018 1:47:00 PM

Sad when marriages turn out to be so different from the expectations.

Lunita Blanca

Date: 6/23/2018 8:50:00 AM

Very touching Amy. Too often marriage changes an ideal to an ordeal.