Wayra - Monday

Poet's Notes

(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Emile Pinet.

Wayra
The wayra is a South American 5-line verse, with syllable counts 5, 7, 7, 6, 8, unrhymed.

Snogging memories whist dreaming of love’s embrace... in Monday morning’s morass reality gets stuck, as clanging bells ring the alarm. (Wayra) 05/21/2020 WEAVING A WAYRA Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/23/2020 8:32:00 PM

Love your wayra. Monday is very popular. AT least in this contest. haha

Emile Pinet
Date: 5/24/2020 7:42:00 AM

Thanks again Andrea, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/23/2020 8:32:00 PM

oh and big congrats,

Emile Pinet
Date: 5/24/2020 7:41:00 AM

Thanks Andrea, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.

Aditi Mishra

Date: 5/23/2020 5:57:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Emile! I am pleased with the way I can relate with the theme of Monday blues and I know how it feels when you dream of love's embrace only to get interrupted by the alarm. :)

Emile Pinet
Date: 5/24/2020 7:40:00 AM

Thanks Aditi, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/23/2020 12:24:00 PM

Congratulations Emile! I am not familiar with this form at all. You did very well with this expressive poem that relates how intrusive an alarm can be. Congratulations my friend on your podium win! xxoo

Emile Pinet
Date: 5/23/2020 1:38:00 PM

Thanks Connie, I like to try my hand at as many forms as I can, your support is always much appreciated my friend, Emile.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/23/2020 4:53:00 AM

i was taken by this drab mood well expressed through your piece...a round of congrats on your trophy award in my challenge, emile...huggs

Emile Pinet
Date: 5/23/2020 8:29:00 AM

Thanks Nette, I appreciate the placement my friend, Emile.