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Waves On the Lake

On a bright sunny day The waves of the lake Rushes to the shore The children jumps the waves Sailboats are in the water Enjoying to sail with the wind Together the sailboats are one On the choppy water

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/6/2021 10:27:00 AM

A fun story/write. I would love to be at a lake. Enjoy your day with blessings....................

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/6/2021 11:19:00 AM

Hello Paula Goldsmith, I would like to be on the lake to. I find the water to be relaxing. Hugs Blessings.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/27/2021 4:45:00 PM

Those waves certainly are mesmerizing, aren't they?! :) gw

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/28/2021 11:05:00 AM

Hello Gershon, yes they are. i find them relaxing . enjoy your day my friend.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 11/21/2021 11:50:00 PM

Enthusiasm jumps out of this one!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/23/2021 10:50:00 AM

Hello Caren, oh the sound of the water coming to shore. i miss that sound. It was so relaxing. Hugs.

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 11/20/2021 8:17:00 PM

Hello Darlene ... water is very attractive for us on a hot day, and to keep us cool - thank you Darlene - Lindsay

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/21/2021 6:21:00 AM

Hello Laurie, yes water is attractive to many people. to go to beaches, swim, watching the wave come to shore. Water is a relaxing sound. Hugs.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/18/2021 1:02:00 PM

I see you embrace the fun part of life!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/19/2021 5:42:00 AM

Hello Kim, this is the fun part of life. Hugs.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/16/2021 1:25:00 PM

Very descriptive and expressive work. I enjoyed reading the scene and imagined being there. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/16/2021 3:22:00 PM

Hello Sara Kendrick, your welcome. Thank you for the lovely comment on my poetry. enjoy your evening my friend. Hugs.

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 11/14/2021 2:35:00 AM

You crafted nice images of a carefree day by a lake Darlene...Delice

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/16/2021 3:23:00 PM

Hello Delice, thank you. Thank you for the lovelycomment. Hugs.

Paul Callus

Date: 11/13/2021 8:05:00 AM

What a lovely scene you paint, Darlene! It is full of movement and a feeling of delight. ~ Have a nice weekend, my friend. // paul

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/13/2021 10:31:00 AM

Hello Paul, thank you for the lovely comment. I love the water. I find the water when the waves come to shore calming. Regards. Darlene.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/11/2021 8:49:00 PM

You can't keep a child away from water, they adore playing in it in fact even adults are drawn to water, may I come? A soothing calming write dear Darlene. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/12/2021 10:28:00 AM

Hello Jennifer, yes you can come. I love the water to. I would walk into it to get wet, then swim. Right adults and children are drawn to the water. For me a lake or stream or oean is relaxing. Hugs.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 11/10/2021 8:33:00 AM

The children love the water Darlene. Tom

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/10/2021 10:03:00 AM

Hello Tom, yes the children do love the water. So do adults that have sailboats. I hope all is well withyou. enjoy your day myfriend.

Bill Baker

Date: 11/9/2021 5:09:00 PM

I like the line, :the sail boats together are one. Sounds like a nice fun day to me, count me in! Bill

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/10/2021 5:52:00 AM

Hello Bill Baker, Yes i will. Enjoy your day my friend.