Darlene De Beaulieu Poet Imagism

Waves On the Lake

On a bright sunny day
The waves of the lake
Rushes to the shore
The children jumps
the waves

Sailboats are in the water
Enjoying to sail 
with the wind
Together the sailboats 
are one
On the choppy water

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Paula Goldsmith December 6, 2021 at 10:27 AM A fun story/write. I would love to be at a lake. Enjoy your day with blessings.................... Darlene De Beaulieu December 6, 2021 at 11:19 AM Hello Paula Goldsmith, I would like to be on the lake to. I find the water to be relaxing. Hugs Blessings.

Gershon Wolf November 27, 2021 at 4:45 PM Those waves certainly are mesmerizing, aren't they?! :) gw Darlene De Beaulieu November 28, 2021 at 11:05 AM Hello Gershon, yes they are. i find them relaxing . enjoy your day my friend.

Caren Krutsinger November 21, 2021 at 11:50 PM Enthusiasm jumps out of this one! Darlene De Beaulieu November 23, 2021 at 10:50 AM Hello Caren, oh the sound of the water coming to shore. i miss that sound. It was so relaxing. Hugs.

Lindsay Laurie November 20, 2021 at 8:17 PM Hello Darlene ... water is very attractive for us on a hot day, and to keep us cool - thank you Darlene - Lindsay Darlene De Beaulieu November 21, 2021 at 6:21 AM Hello Laurie, yes water is attractive to many people. to go to beaches, swim, watching the wave come to shore. Water is a relaxing sound. Hugs.

Kim Rodrigues November 18, 2021 at 1:02 PM I see you embrace the fun part of life! Darlene De Beaulieu November 19, 2021 at 5:42 AM Hello Kim, this is the fun part of life. Hugs.

Sara Kendrick November 16, 2021 at 1:25 PM Very descriptive and expressive work. I enjoyed reading the scene and imagined being there. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara Darlene De Beaulieu November 16, 2021 at 3:22 PM Hello Sara Kendrick, your welcome. Thank you for the lovely comment on my poetry. enjoy your evening my friend. Hugs.

Delice Arleen Skelly November 14, 2021 at 2:35 AM You crafted nice images of a carefree day by a lake Darlene...Delice Darlene De Beaulieu November 16, 2021 at 3:23 PM Hello Delice, thank you. Thank you for the lovelycomment. Hugs.

Paul Callus November 13, 2021 at 8:05 AM What a lovely scene you paint, Darlene! It is full of movement and a feeling of delight. ~ Have a nice weekend, my friend. // paul Darlene De Beaulieu November 13, 2021 at 10:31 AM Hello Paul, thank you for the lovely comment. I love the water. I find the water when the waves come to shore calming. Regards. Darlene.

Jennifer Proxenos November 11, 2021 at 8:49 PM You can't keep a child away from water, they adore playing in it in fact even adults are drawn to water, may I come? A soothing calming write dear Darlene. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Darlene De Beaulieu November 12, 2021 at 10:28 AM Hello Jennifer, yes you can come. I love the water to. I would walk into it to get wet, then swim. Right adults and children are drawn to the water. For me a lake or stream or oean is relaxing. Hugs.

Tom Cunningham November 10, 2021 at 8:33 AM The children love the water Darlene. Tom Darlene De Beaulieu November 10, 2021 at 10:03 AM Hello Tom, yes the children do love the water. So do adults that have sailboats. I hope all is well withyou. enjoy your day myfriend.

Bill Baker November 9, 2021 at 5:09 PM I like the line, :the sail boats together are one. Sounds like a nice fun day to me, count me in! Bill Darlene De Beaulieu November 10, 2021 at 5:52 AM Hello Bill Baker, Yes i will. Enjoy your day my friend.