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Written for the 16 beautiful lines contest sponsored by Constance La France

"Someday, somewhere - anywhere, unfailingly, you'll find yourself, and that, and only that, can be the happiest or bitterest hour of your life." ~ Pablo Neruda I sail through citrine waves of the moon’s pulse, weaving my spark from sea-stars numb to the blaze of a dream-lashed gaze ~ mute to the masked mist of ghosts, as somehow between the seraphic sighs of rising Luna and the aching sun, there I found my muse crawling and cradling~ clouds of love bathed in luminous lavender… So tonight, must I heed black-magic mantras, spelled in neon gold by lips that lie, or shall I wade through caramelized clarity, for I’ve long homed hues of blooming twilight, brushing the wistful heart of waning dusk, drowning fiery flares within vain veins, while the wind assumes I’ll touch no sand, anchored by timeless traces of poetry...

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Date: 5/14/2025 9:01:00 AM
"while the wind assumes I’ll touch no sand" so haunting, ethereal. A wonder of a poem - <3
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Date: 5/14/2025 6:53:00 AM
Dearest Inky,This is absolutely enchanting! The vivid imagery and rhythmic flow make it feel like a dream wrapped in poetic magic. Your use of color and celestial elements paints an almost ethereal landscape, where emotions intertwine with the night sky. It’s beautifully introspective and evocative, leaving a sense of wandering through both longing and light. Simply mesmerizing!...Love and Hugs
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Date: 5/13/2025 3:07:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Waves of the Moon" write with a great ending. What a creative picture you have here. "Good Luck" We both did her contest. Have a wonderful day writing away.........
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Date: 5/13/2025 1:34:00 PM
there certainly is magic in your words Ink, this is truly beautiful and may our words forever be "anchored by timeless traces of poetry" hugs jan x
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/13/2025 1:43:00 PM
sorry i've not been around much recently I've had a bit of a health issue recently and now i am busy with exam support till the middle of June. hugs Jan xx
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Ink Empress
Date: 5/13/2025 1:36:00 PM
Thank you so much dear Jan, appreciate your kindness. Sending you light always
Date: 5/13/2025 1:32:00 PM
There's something a few people don't know about you, Ink. You can count! You know why I'm teasing you. Your lines are charming except for those black magic mantras. I think wading in citrine waves would be much more pleasant.
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Ink Empress
Date: 5/13/2025 1:35:00 PM
I had to count this couple of times lolol i hope i got 16 lines gosh! Thank you linnersz so kind of you. We live in a world so dark sometimes all we need is inner light to guide us.
Date: 5/13/2025 1:28:00 PM
Timeless traces of poetry huh ! Amazing as always
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Ink Empress
Date: 5/13/2025 1:35:00 PM
Yes my dahlin

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