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Waves of Sadness

Waves rolling over the sand Waves pounding, eroding The boundary of the ocean beaten By a massive force of water Beaches beaten but still glistening with the wetness Glistening like tears of a thousand times thousand Whales moan, dolphins play To ease the sadness for today

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/27/2011 6:40:00 AM
Wow you Doris. Very good.
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Date: 1/23/2010 12:19:00 PM
oh, (to borrow Brian's recent poetic word for the day)what "euphony" in these words ,Doris. Sad or ugly things can also be written about beautifully and you did so well with this. Andrea
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Date: 1/18/2010 9:44:00 AM
Great mental vacation.... Wow, I didn't want to return to reality.....:}.....:JP}
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Date: 1/18/2010 8:11:00 AM
this is a really good write good imagery! i like it1
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Date: 1/17/2010 4:49:00 PM
Interesting thoughts put to pen. Is this about a specific place and time? Keep the creative pen flowing. Mom
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