Waves of Loneliness

Waves of the sea of darkness
Break …. Break … Break
against cotton cloud rocks,
and heighten my loneliness.  

Calves that hopped around,
and bulls that smelled the scent
of love, and butted their heads 
against brook banks, have gone…

Leaving me, in rising darkness.
Shepard boys who guarded them,
caressing their manes and horns, 
have left me, in rising darkness. 

Bird youths that sang to amuse
bird damsels that tossed their heads,
balancing their legs to violins' tune,
have left me, in rising darkness. 

Tired old Sun that gently stroked 
my heart with his tenderly smile, 
through foliage and branches, 
has left me, in rising darkness. 

All that amused me have gone,
Leaving loneliness and darkness.


*A 1st Place* in the following contest (judged on Nov. 30, 2020)

Nov. 29, 2020
UN-RHY-ME Poetry Contest
Contest sponsor: Brian Strand

Inspiration from my own poem, “Where have they all gone?” (published in 2018)
And Tennyson’s “Break, Break, Break”.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Ashley Avatar
December 2, 2020 at 5:50 PM
Newton, your wonderful pen spills dark melancholy beauty in waves of loneliness. Congratulations for your excellent win in Brian’s contest.. ~Susan
Ranaweera  Avatar
December 2, 2020 at 5:57 PM
Thank you so much, Susan, for this wonderfully sweet comment, congrats and the complement!!
Dietrich Avatar
December 2, 2020 at 2:08 PM
wow, Newton, this is amazing writing. Congrats. a FAVE for me
Ranaweera  Avatar
December 2, 2020 at 3:35 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea, for this lovely comment and the complement!!
Watt Avatar
December 1, 2020 at 11:50 AM
Newton, very original imagery weaves a tapestry of melancholy loneliness. Well done, and congratulations for your #1 win with Brian ~ John
Ranaweera  Avatar
December 1, 2020 at 4:17 PM
Thank you so much, John, for this amazingly great comment and the congratulations!!
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