Waves

Wave hello Wave goodbye Ride the wave Surfer's high

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M. L. Kiser

Date: 7/1/2021 6:08:00 PM

Cleverly penned.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/1/2021 2:10:00 PM

A real ride of a write. Love it. Wish I was at the beach. Have a blessed day.............

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/1/2021 6:45:00 PM

When you wish upon a beach... ~ Jiminy Crickett

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 6/30/2021 11:34:00 PM

A nice sing-songy feel about this one.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/1/2021 6:31:00 PM

It's better than a bobblehead, anyway. lol. Thanks, Caren. :) gw

L Milton Hankins

Date: 6/29/2021 8:33:00 PM

Good one, gw. (chuckling) I used to hear them yell..."surf's up!" I never ever heard them yell..."surfer's up!"

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/29/2021 8:36:00 PM

Ha, ha! Surfer's up is sure a whole lot better than the opposite, though! Smiles, Gershon