Wavelets On the Pool

Tiny wavelets on the pool today,  a gentle
breeze and raindrops fall with a rhythmic
pitter patter. The ducks and wildfowl pay
no heed, around the sedge bob and feed. 
The Heron standing as if frozen, his
cunning eye a prey has chosen. And the
elegant Swan glides, the Cormorant
beneath the water slides. And the grey 
clouds float on by on this quiet day at the
pool, the reeds sway and insects hide away,
dry wings are required to survive. The Otter
on its back dines on an unlucky Crayfish,
seems well at ease with his surrounds, and
the Water Vole enters a hole to the squeak 
of hungry mouths. In the centre of the pool
a love dance, two Crested Grebes court, 
ducking, bobbing, all magic to the eye. All
this beauty in the pitter patter, life goes on 
it does not matter. Nature gives in many
ways, and as always this heart enslaves.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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April 2, 2010 at 2:12 PM
The title captured my attention. Nice use of imagery. Keep on writing! Happy Easter. Karen
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March 28, 2010 at 10:27 AM
So beautiful Daniel..So wonderful indeed..Charma
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March 28, 2010 at 8:54 AM
Amazing write, loved it! It made my Sunday afternoon!!! thank you, love Simone
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March 28, 2010 at 8:20 AM
beautiful poetry here, your lucky most don't comment once you reach 10, think ya on the charts after ten, but me rather your on the hot charts or not I comment. Enjoyed this poetry here and have a great day:)
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March 28, 2010 at 5:11 AM
Daniel you have painted a beautiful picture here with words - Captivating and honest - Thanks for such a nature inspired write - I enjoyed it a lot -:)
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March 28, 2010 at 3:48 AM
Beautiful...as usual, Daniel. Smiles, Dane Ann
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March 28, 2010 at 12:44 AM
Daniel ths poem is another masterpiece .. beautiful to read on this spring morning in Malta.Charma
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March 27, 2010 at 8:08 PM
enjoyed!!
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March 27, 2010 at 12:02 PM
Daniel , you have some great lines in this one. I loved the part about the love dance of the crested Grebes and how you discuss Nature going on despite the rain. Very descriptive and enjoyable reading. LUv, Andrea
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March 27, 2010 at 10:23 AM
As always, Daniel, a breathtaking scene soon to be played out as Spring weather turns warmer round these parts where I live.. elegant nature surrounds ..luv it of course..thankxxx for your special comments on my poetry.. am on another site also.. http.//poetrypub.ning.com.. FREE and FUN if u want to check it out..luv .."Sweetheart"
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March 27, 2010 at 9:00 AM
awe- great imagery, i love just to sit and watch, listen nature, great poem.
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March 27, 2010 at 8:53 AM
Daniel....in a word...Exquisite!
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March 27, 2010 at 8:03 AM
You find so much great inspiration in nature, Daniel, and it's a joy I share. Thank you for introducing me to the otter, crayfish and all of the other wonderful creatures that bring us happiness by their mere existence. Wonderful poem! Love, Carolyn
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March 27, 2010 at 6:54 AM
Great write that invites the nature lover to come in and dine with the birds...Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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