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Wavelets On The Pool

Tiny wavelets on the pool today, a gentle breeze and raindrops fall with a rhythmic pitter patter. The ducks and wildfowl pay no heed, around the sedge bob and feed. The Heron standing as if frozen, his cunning eye a prey has chosen. And the elegant Swan glides, the Cormorant beneath the water slides. And the grey clouds float on by on this quiet day at the pool, the reeds sway and insects hide away, dry wings are required to survive. The Otter on its back dines on an unlucky Crayfish, seems well at ease with his surrounds, and the Water Vole enters a hole to the squeak of hungry mouths. In the centre of the pool a love dance, two Crested Grebes court, ducking, bobbing, all magic to the eye. All this beauty in the pitter patter, life goes on it does not matter. Nature gives in many ways, and as always this heart enslaves.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Date: 4/2/2010 2:12:00 PM
The title captured my attention. Nice use of imagery. Keep on writing! Happy Easter. Karen
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Date: 3/28/2010 10:27:00 AM
So beautiful Daniel..So wonderful indeed..Charma
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Date: 3/28/2010 8:54:00 AM
Amazing write, loved it! It made my Sunday afternoon!!! thank you, love Simone
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Date: 3/28/2010 8:20:00 AM
beautiful poetry here, your lucky most don't comment once you reach 10, think ya on the charts after ten, but me rather your on the hot charts or not I comment. Enjoyed this poetry here and have a great day:)
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Date: 3/28/2010 5:11:00 AM
Daniel you have painted a beautiful picture here with words - Captivating and honest - Thanks for such a nature inspired write - I enjoyed it a lot -:)
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Date: 3/28/2010 3:48:00 AM usual, Daniel. Smiles, Dane Ann
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Date: 3/28/2010 12:44:00 AM
Daniel ths poem is another masterpiece .. beautiful to read on this spring morning in Malta.Charma
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Date: 3/27/2010 8:08:00 PM
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Date: 3/27/2010 12:02:00 PM
Daniel , you have some great lines in this one. I loved the part about the love dance of the crested Grebes and how you discuss Nature going on despite the rain. Very descriptive and enjoyable reading. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 3/27/2010 10:23:00 AM
As always, Daniel, a breathtaking scene soon to be played out as Spring weather turns warmer round these parts where I live.. elegant nature surrounds ..luv it of course..thankxxx for your special comments on my poetry.. am on another site also.. http.// FREE and FUN if u want to check it out..luv .."Sweetheart"
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Date: 3/27/2010 9:00:00 AM
awe- great imagery, i love just to sit and watch, listen nature, great poem.
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Date: 3/27/2010 8:53:00 AM a word...Exquisite!
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Date: 3/27/2010 8:03:00 AM
You find so much great inspiration in nature, Daniel, and it's a joy I share. Thank you for introducing me to the otter, crayfish and all of the other wonderful creatures that bring us happiness by their mere existence. Wonderful poem! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/27/2010 6:54:00 AM
Great write that invites the nature lover to come in and dine with the birds...Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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