Wave of Fantasy

I ride this wave of fantasy that sends my desires astir. What dreams may come from the spiraling are yet to vaporize in the stars. The ebb and flow become the tide of dysphoria as I ride this crest of fantasy to the Cancri netherworld and I roil from its heat! My soul aches from the pain and I search for euphoria through a new fantastical wave and find the coolness I seek in Uranus’ aquamarine comfort. The white caps are the stars that move me among the planets, my energy spinning with the tides; a maelstrom circling through whirling and twirling consciousness. Touring this universe of planets, I spin through wave after wave of fantastical, precognitive dreams, muddled and muddied as I return to shore.
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Wolf Avatar
February 15, 2023 at 6:38 PM
A 'Magical Mystery Tour' far better than the Beatles gave us!! ~ Ad astra per aspera, Gershon
Fowler Avatar
February 16, 2023 at 7:00 AM
Oh well now, I'm not sure its better the Fab Four! LOL Not many hardships here. laf
George Avatar
February 14, 2023 at 8:23 PM
Lovely escapade into the outer world on the wings of fantasy ! Outstanding work . All the Best Linda in the contest!
Fowler Avatar
February 15, 2023 at 5:53 AM
You are kind Valsa. Thank you! :)
Dutta Avatar
February 14, 2023 at 7:54 PM
Enjoyed your journey through wave of fantasy. All the best. Have good days
Fowler Avatar
February 15, 2023 at 5:52 AM
Thank you Anisha. I so appreciate your visits and supportive words! :)
Kiser Avatar
February 12, 2023 at 2:55 PM
I can feel the wave energy of this pen; great effect and well done.
Fowler Avatar
February 12, 2023 at 3:34 PM
I am warmed by your comments ML. Many thanks ! :)
Daniel Avatar
February 12, 2023 at 4:52 AM
Amazing journey through your dreams, Linda:)
Fowler Avatar
February 12, 2023 at 8:03 AM
Thanks Jo. Appreciate the visit and comment! :)
Baker Avatar
February 11, 2023 at 3:48 PM
Waves throughout the universe ... quite the ride, Linda. Good luck in the contest! A poet friend in Texas, Bill
Fowler Avatar
February 12, 2023 at 8:03 AM
Thanks for coming along for the ride! :)
Buhagiar Avatar
February 11, 2023 at 2:46 AM
What a fantastic way to describe our dreams. Great write, Linda.
Fowler Avatar
February 11, 2023 at 7:03 AM
Many thanks Victor! Linda
Hawley Avatar
February 10, 2023 at 6:34 PM
Is this a fantasy or is this a nightmare? Also fantastical is a fabulous word!
Fowler Avatar
February 10, 2023 at 7:37 PM
Yes Miranda. LOL A fantasy may have a beginning and an end...starting from nothing, twisting, turning, evolving...then returning. The landing is up to you. Thanks for the nod on fantastical!
Horsman Avatar
February 10, 2023 at 4:06 PM
Wow, love this journey through the planets and the stars, and the poetry, beautiful and constructive. Hope you are well Linda, thank you for your support, all the best...Harry
Fowler Avatar
February 10, 2023 at 4:26 PM
Many thanks Harry. Glad to see you about. Stay well! hugs, Linda
Volumes Avatar
February 10, 2023 at 2:10 PM
Now that is a fantastical journey Linda. So well written, and spins one's mind into shear fantasy. Well done.
Fowler Avatar
February 10, 2023 at 2:53 PM
Thank you Wendy. I appreciate your visit and comments today. I used to be more of a dreamer than I am now. I've been accused of carrying rocks around just to keep my feet on the ground. LOL :)
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