Watermelon Summer

That was the summer...
Of watermelon fields, and hot, humid days
Of suntanned traces, and mosquito-bit faces
When the purpose of knees
Was to be skinned
Of running down a country road
Bare feet on hot asphalt
Criss-crossing across an open field
Helping ourselves
To thick pink crimson chunks
That melted cool on sun-parched tongues
Dribbling from chins
Leaving the best part
The black bullet seeds
To be spit out in rapid fire
Against the wind
Against the dusty ground
Against each other
And when the ammunition was spent
A pillowed head, among the vines
To dream on clouds that whispered by
In the blue afternoon sky
That watermelon summer



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For Skat's Contest: Summer
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Winter Avatar
February 16, 2010 at 2:08 PM
those sure were the days. sounds like heaven to me. beautiful write Carrie. it must be a most special memory for you. warm congrats on your well deserved win. love & hugs, shar oxo
Brown Avatar
February 16, 2010 at 5:44 AM
Congratulations on your win in Mac's Contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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February 15, 2010 at 3:34 PM
Congrats Carrie on your winning poem in Mac's contest.. a wonderful win and a delightful poem .. cannot wait for Summer to arrive.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
Bellefleur Avatar
June 19, 2009 at 11:03 AM
Such a picture of summer and those lovely watermelons... Such a picture it portrays..
Rider Avatar
June 16, 2009 at 11:50 AM
This evokes such crisp memories of my own childhood, watermelon and farms...well written Carrie! glad you enjoyed my fingerprints poem also,. Thank you for your comments. ~Trudy~
Loving Iii Avatar
June 8, 2009 at 5:02 PM
in this we share. we share the summers the sun the waiting almost untill their ripe. the dusty road that tractors grade. oh i remember the days. John Henry Loving III
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June 7, 2009 at 9:10 AM
Ahhh,..those fire spit'n days ! TY for the mems ! Loved this one,..dang,..you write quite well there girlie ! james
Buys Avatar
June 7, 2009 at 7:22 AM
We would go and picnic in the mountains and my dad would wedge the watermelon in the mountain stream. Later we would eat that ice cold watermelon. This is so lovely and brings back so many memories. Very well done. Love Heidie
Johnson Avatar
June 7, 2009 at 7:13 AM
i love your watermelon summer. I can taste that juice. Thank you for reading and commenting. Love, Joyce
Higgins Avatar
June 7, 2009 at 6:34 AM
Beautiful memories Carrie...sweetly written and presented.
Strand Avatar
June 7, 2009 at 12:43 AM
Lovely vignette Carrie as Jim says one for the favourites.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
Goff Avatar
June 6, 2009 at 8:12 PM
just magnificent imagery! Carrie! must fav this! really fun to feel every line! THANK-YOU! Jim
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