Watermelon Summer

That was the summer...
Of watermelon fields, and hot, humid days
Of suntanned traces, and mosquito-bit faces
When the purpose of knees
Was to be skinned
Of running down a country road
Bare feet on hot asphalt
Criss-crossing across an open field
Helping ourselves
To thick pink crimson chunks
That melted cool on sun-parched tongues
Dribbling from chins
Leaving the best part
The black bullet seeds
To be spit out in rapid fire
Against the wind
Against the dusty ground
Against each other
And when the ammunition was spent
A pillowed head, among the vines
To dream on clouds that whispered by
In the blue afternoon sky
That watermelon summer



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For Skat's Contest: Summer

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 2/16/2010 2:08:00 PM
those sure were the days. sounds like heaven to me. beautiful write Carrie. it must be a most special memory for you. warm congrats on your well deserved win. love & hugs, shar oxo
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Date: 2/16/2010 5:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Mac's Contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/15/2010 3:34:00 PM
Congrats Carrie on your winning poem in Mac's contest.. a wonderful win and a delightful poem .. cannot wait for Summer to arrive.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 6/19/2009 11:03:00 AM
Such a picture of summer and those lovely watermelons... Such a picture it portrays..
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Date: 6/16/2009 11:50:00 AM
This evokes such crisp memories of my own childhood, watermelon and farms...well written Carrie! glad you enjoyed my fingerprints poem also,. Thank you for your comments. ~Trudy~
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Date: 6/8/2009 5:02:00 PM
in this we share. we share the summers the sun the waiting almost untill their ripe. the dusty road that tractors grade. oh i remember the days. John Henry Loving III
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Date: 6/7/2009 9:10:00 AM
Ahhh,..those fire spit'n days ! TY for the mems ! Loved this one,..dang,..you write quite well there girlie ! james
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Date: 6/7/2009 7:22:00 AM
We would go and picnic in the mountains and my dad would wedge the watermelon in the mountain stream. Later we would eat that ice cold watermelon. This is so lovely and brings back so many memories. Very well done. Love Heidie
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Date: 6/7/2009 7:13:00 AM
i love your watermelon summer. I can taste that juice. Thank you for reading and commenting. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/7/2009 6:34:00 AM
Beautiful memories Carrie...sweetly written and presented.
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Date: 6/7/2009 12:43:00 AM
Lovely vignette Carrie as Jim says one for the favourites.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 6/6/2009 8:12:00 PM
just magnificent imagery! Carrie! must fav this! really fun to feel every line! THANK-YOU! Jim
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