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Garden 1 Watering

Mosquitoes buzzing Watering in evening Waking sleeping bugs Just learned about syllables in Haiku. Sorry

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Date: 4/8/2018 6:14:00 AM
PS: regarding the syllables. The form maybe arbitrary in any case, but your poem is beautiful, whatever we may call it. Many wishes. I must do the gardening now, Kai
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Date: 2/1/2019 4:09:00 PM
Kai, I just notice what you were referring to. You are right! Thanks
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Lunita Blanca
Date: 4/8/2018 9:42:00 AM
Thank you for visiting Kai.
Date: 4/8/2018 6:13:00 AM
Nice one. Kai
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Lunita Blanca
Date: 4/8/2018 9:44:00 AM
I am finding your prose refreshing Kai.

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