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Garden 1 Watering

Mosquitoes buzzing 
               Watering in evening	
           Waking sleeping bugs 


    Just learned about syllables in Haiku. Sorry

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Kai Michael Neumann

April 8, 2018 at 6:14 AM

PS: regarding the syllables. The form maybe arbitrary in any case, but your poem is beautiful, whatever we may call it. Many wishes. I must do the gardening now, Kai

Lunita Blanca

February 1, 2019 at 4:09 PM

Kai, I just notice what you were referring to. You are right! Thanks

Lunita Blanca

April 8, 2018 at 9:42 AM

Thank you for visiting Kai.