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Waterfalls - Duo Rhyme

Roaring torrents go tumbling down Splashing beads of clear tiny crowns. Sparkling tears from heaven above, Lathering pools of cleansing love. Frothy white, like a snowy dove, Rushing waters that push and shove. Prism rainbows gleaming above, God's handiwork for his beloved. Cascading falls, deafening sound, Earth's paradise, beauty unbound. © 07-10-2012 Revised: 02-27-2013 100% Nature Contest

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Skat A

Date: 3/7/2013 11:18:00 AM

congrats~Yours truly *SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/1/2013 9:13:00 PM

Tanya, thank you very much for considering my 100 % nature contest..Congratulations in showing off Natures true after glow, always~ PD

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/10/2012 1:44:00 PM

Great descriptive winning work..Congrats...Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/9/2012 10:47:00 AM

A well deserved placement for you in the Duo-Rhyme contest. Congratulations Tanya. Love, Carol

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 8/5/2012 12:43:00 PM

Beautiful imagery, Tanya! Congrats on your win! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

David Williams

Date: 8/4/2012 2:24:00 AM

Tanya congrats on your win,. excellent piece...David

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/4/2012 12:59:00 AM

Tanya, You have captured both the aesthetic physical immersed with spiritual emotion in this lovely Duo-rhyme. I love your lines: "Lathering pools of cleansing love. Frothy white, like a snowy dove," Mary would have loved it as I do. Congratulations on your well deserved win.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/3/2012 7:07:00 PM

Tanya, I enjoyed your use of imagery in this duo rhyme for my contest and wish to congratulate you on your win. It's very pretty!

Anne P. Murray

Date: 7/26/2012 2:46:00 PM

Very cathartic and flowing with peaceful words and thoughts

Richard Palmer

Date: 7/11/2012 1:29:00 PM

what a view,love it Tanya

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/11/2012 12:05:00 PM

It was such a pleasure to read your poetry today Tanya. I hope to be able in the next few weeks to find the time and energy to read and comment. May you walk through the garden of inspiration and continue to write and share your poetry with us. Love, Carol

Joann Grisetti

Date: 7/10/2012 6:20:00 PM

Such beautiful and lively images in your poem. Sure to be a winner.

Russell Sivey

Date: 7/10/2012 3:14:00 PM

Wow, the lovely descriptions are astounding, I really enjoyed the pristine expressions you created here! Great Work!