Waterfalls - Duo Rhyme

Roaring torrents go tumbling down
Splashing beads of clear tiny crowns.
Sparkling tears from heaven above,
Lathering pools of cleansing love.
Frothy white, like a snowy dove,
Rushing waters that push and shove.
Prism rainbows gleaming above,
God's handiwork for his beloved.
Cascading falls, deafening sound,
Earth's paradise, beauty unbound.

        ©  07-10-2012
Revised: 02-27-2013

100% Nature Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 3/7/2013 11:18:00 AM
congrats~Yours truly *SKAT
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Date: 3/1/2013 9:13:00 PM
Tanya, thank you very much for considering my 100 % nature contest..Congratulations in showing off Natures true after glow, always~ PD
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Date: 8/10/2012 1:44:00 PM
Great descriptive winning work..Congrats...Sara
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Date: 8/9/2012 10:47:00 AM
A well deserved placement for you in the Duo-Rhyme contest. Congratulations Tanya. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/5/2012 12:43:00 PM
Beautiful imagery, Tanya! Congrats on your win! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 8/4/2012 2:24:00 AM
Tanya congrats on your win,. excellent piece...David
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Date: 8/4/2012 12:59:00 AM
Tanya, You have captured both the aesthetic physical immersed with spiritual emotion in this lovely Duo-rhyme. I love your lines: "Lathering pools of cleansing love. Frothy white, like a snowy dove," Mary would have loved it as I do. Congratulations on your well deserved win.
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Date: 8/3/2012 7:07:00 PM
Tanya, I enjoyed your use of imagery in this duo rhyme for my contest and wish to congratulate you on your win. It's very pretty!
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Date: 7/26/2012 2:46:00 PM
Very cathartic and flowing with peaceful words and thoughts
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Date: 7/11/2012 1:29:00 PM
what a view,love it Tanya
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Date: 7/11/2012 12:05:00 PM
It was such a pleasure to read your poetry today Tanya. I hope to be able in the next few weeks to find the time and energy to read and comment. May you walk through the garden of inspiration and continue to write and share your poetry with us. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/10/2012 6:20:00 PM
Such beautiful and lively images in your poem. Sure to be a winner.
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Date: 7/10/2012 3:14:00 PM
Wow, the lovely descriptions are astounding, I really enjoyed the pristine expressions you created here! Great Work!
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