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Waterfalls

The river flows and flows Though often it appears completely still The current is unceasing Distracted by reflection of bird, tree and sky We do not notice And then, a waterfall appears Like a river, our lives flow on current We can’t know rising change Then one day, a tipping point What took years to reach has arrived And there is no return As we are unaware of this drift, The realization is unexpected And so, like a river, we must fulfill our destiny We must appreciate our strength and Every brook and stream and branch We’ve known along the way We must accept the waterfalls of our lives Not in regret or fear But in their resplendent beauty 7/10/18

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Date: 7/24/2018 2:16:00 PM
What a lovely way to look at life my friend. Great advice. : )
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/24/2018 3:57:00 PM
Thank you Connie xxoo
Date: 7/19/2018 8:27:00 AM
Nice.... I like the fact you became the waterfall...
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/19/2018 8:43:00 AM
Thank so much, Silent One!!
Date: 7/18/2018 7:55:00 AM
Awesome personification, Love the message in there too.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/18/2018 8:20:00 AM
Thanks so much, Harry !!!
Date: 7/13/2018 6:35:00 PM
A beautiful comparison to waterfalls and an excellent way to look at life. ;0)
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/13/2018 8:00:00 PM
Thanks so much, Alesia xxoo
Date: 7/11/2018 3:31:00 PM
Beautifully written Mike! Happy Wednesday :)
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/12/2018 5:53:00 AM
Thank you Heidi xxoo
Date: 7/10/2018 2:03:00 PM
May the waterfalls keep flowing and our memories be deep. Wonderful, well executed poem, Mike!
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/10/2018 2:12:00 PM
Thank so much, Warren!!
Date: 7/10/2018 1:32:00 PM
I am most happy to read from you today Mike. Some regrets are harder and take longer to appreciate than others; yet they molded us still. Hopefully for the better. Soulful piece Mike :)
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/10/2018 1:34:00 PM
Thank you so much, FJ, I really appreciate your kind feedback this afternoon!
Date: 7/10/2018 1:30:00 PM
Lovely comparison,our lives like a river, we all hope for a smooth flow but sometimes it meanders along an unexpected course, we just have to take what comes. Tom
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/10/2018 1:35:00 PM
Thank you so much Tom, sometimes it feels as though something has happened overnight when it actually has slowly been changing everyday.
Date: 7/10/2018 1:20:00 PM
Deep and meaningful--magnificent poetry..well written, as always, Mike.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/10/2018 1:35:00 PM
Thanks so much for your kindness this day, Vijay!!
Date: 7/10/2018 12:04:00 PM
I think my river got dammed up! Nicely penned, Mike. Who doesn't love a refreshing waterfall?
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/10/2018 12:54:00 PM
Thanks Daniel, It can sometimes feel that way !
Date: 7/10/2018 11:34:00 AM
- So beautifully described and a wonderful comparison, Mike - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/10/2018 12:02:00 PM
Thanks so much, Anne-Lise xxoo

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