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Remember my brother’s tender eyes.. never failed to support needy, with compassion and gentleness. For him, not one human being deserves to suffer, every animal needs to be taken care of; every bud, every leaf should be touched with inimitable tenderness.  kindness flows gentle  jade waterfalls streaming down  healing charred sad hearts For him, every child deserves equal opportunities. Once my father asked him if he had a book which someone else needed, but didn’t have money to buy. He answered - “ Yes, I do. You can give it to him”. Actually he still needed the book for his courses, but didn’t want to disappoint the needy person, who might fail because of lack of resources. Later my brother was copying materials borrowing books from the library, without letting anyone know, and somehow managing to complete his own work - but with no complaints, and no regrets. I can not imagine a kindness quieter and deeper than this! He is gone, he left a void, but his legacy of a kindness with no barriers, remains in our hearts.  ignite mercy pure resplendent lighthouse beacon shining compassion  August 6, 2021 For "Kindness" Poetry Contest Sponsor: Regina Mcintosh Syllables (5-7-5) checked by HMS.com

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Date: 8/8/2021 1:32:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this contest entry that reads like a good contender to me. Some people seem to be born with a little something extra in their makeup to be able to give beyond themselves. I am glad you shared this with us. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/9/2021 6:13:00 AM
Thank you so much, Sara - your inspiring comment means a lot. Yes, some people are born with some innate goodness - some ability to give, doesn't matter what the situation is!
Date: 8/8/2021 7:45:00 AM
A very moving tribute Haibun to your brother Malabika, what a wonderful kind person he was, kindnesses that will be remembered for ever. Best wishes ~ Belle
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Date: 8/8/2021 10:49:00 AM
Thank you, Belle. He was truly a kind person - this is just one incident!
Date: 8/8/2021 5:58:00 AM
This is a brilliant Haibun...The ver essence of kindness is well-depicted in each line. A fav for me!!! Best wishes for the high placement!!
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Date: 8/8/2021 6:01:00 AM
Thank you so much, Dear Friend. Your lovely comments always inspire me, and I feel humbled! A huge thank you for sending this to your favourites. Appreciate so much. Love and hugs ~ Mala
Date: 8/6/2021 12:41:00 PM
A lovely tribute to your brother Mala, he sounds a wonderful kind person and I know he's missed terribly. Best of luck in the contest this is a lovely example of his kindness. Tom
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Date: 8/6/2021 3:49:00 PM
Thank you, Tom. It’s very difficult to accept this loss, but he will be with us for ever.
Date: 8/6/2021 6:38:00 AM
This is very moving. The people we love always leave something special behind when they go. I can see your brothers kindness was a standout feature of his way. Thank you for sharing this about him. Sincere regards and best wishes.
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Date: 8/6/2021 7:28:00 AM
Thank you so much, Natasha. I am touched by your lovely comment.

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