Waterfall

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whitewater appeared a rumbling roar filled the air the waterfall’s near

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Paige Hind

Date: 7/15/2025 7:34:00 PM

A lovely image- could almost hear it!

Bill Baker
Date: 7/15/2025 8:39:00 PM

Thanks, Bill

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/15/2025 12:27:00 PM

One can only experience when out in the rush of water! I’ve walked big boulders near a waterfall and gone white water rafting down the rapids (not easy nor too hard). All the adventure! God bless!

Bill Baker
Date: 7/15/2025 5:25:00 PM

Same here Kim. Sara and I canoed a lot our first few years of marriage. Adventures have been abundant in our lives together. Thanks for the comment, as I see we have more in common than before. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Joe Dimino

Date: 7/15/2025 6:36:00 AM

Always refreshing and fascinating -- love the outdoors...will respectfully question God about mosquitoes wisdom someday I suspect. Excellent imagery, Bill.

Bill Baker
Date: 7/15/2025 5:22:00 PM

Thanks for the encouraging comments, Joe. We'll get all the answers when they don't matter anymore. LOL In reality, that is now. Sin can really interfere with the answers I get. Bill

Sara Baker

Date: 7/14/2025 4:34:00 PM

you captured the image of a waterfall perfectly...plus I like the picture you chose!

Bill Baker
Date: 7/14/2025 5:18:00 PM

Thank you for reading and commenting on each of my poems, Sara. You're the best! Bill