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I have no sage advice; no words can bring solace to such losses. Knowing the darkness that can surround someone, instead of wise words, I offer to you this poem, because it says I share your sadness, and I wrap my arms around you with hugs.

 

 

Waterdrops For Sweet Eileen

Water Drops

Waterdrops
Falling from the sky
Waterdrops falling from my eyes
Tumbling down, in sorrow’s depth I drown

If only my waterdrops
Could water your heart
I would drown you with happiness
Giving life a new start

Are waterdrops not the seeds of hope?
In the darkness for years I too did grope
If only my waterdrops
Could whisper the right words

Waterdrops
Washing over the worlds woes
Rainbows hidden in depressions throes
I fall to my knees, in a terrible fright

Waterdrops have conquered
This shining black knight
For how can I save the damsel in distress?
The fiercest of demons, has put me to the test

Waterdrops on roses
Whispering flowers
Winds caressing the darkest of rains
I am left to pray

Longing to see her smile and poetry again
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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De Beaulieu Avatar
May 15, 2017 at 2:22 PM
Elieen will like this poem you wrote for her. It beautiful well written. She will appreciate this poem.
Roper Avatar
May 14, 2017 at 7:52 PM
Back to see you again :) even though I don't say much....
Vaso Avatar
May 14, 2017 at 7:56 PM
Saying Hello is like a ray of sunshine, Your heart speaks louder than words!!! :) Hugs!
Chircop Avatar
May 12, 2017 at 8:16 AM
Eileen is not only my dear friend but even my soul sister.I had the honour of meeting her and her wonderful family...She is a beautiful soul...May your poem fills her with happiness and bring to her a smile...I want to hear her roar again....Extremely beautiful poem...A fave for sure.
Vaso Avatar
May 14, 2017 at 8:30 PM
I hope one day to meet her and her family, there is an expression, birds of feather, and you have shown how true this is!!! Hugs!!
Smith Avatar
May 9, 2017 at 2:36 PM
Such tenderness shared Arthur, here's to the hope that brings comfort to sweet Eileen...
Vaso Avatar
May 14, 2017 at 8:19 PM
I wish comfort to all! thanks Charlie!
Callus Avatar
May 9, 2017 at 12:22 PM
In certain cases words are not enough, but in this case your beautiful and comforting words have served their purpose, Arthur. ~ Regards // paul
Vaso Avatar
May 14, 2017 at 8:16 PM
Thanks Paul, that means a lot, as I tried hard to do just that.
Onclaud Avatar
May 8, 2017 at 12:46 PM
lovely dedication for eileen; you are so compassionate, arthur.. and talking of rain, i know how gusty it is in canada.. but from where i am, the heat is terrible, hence my poems about drizzles, ohh.. thanks, friend for passing by.. huggs
Vaso Avatar
May 14, 2017 at 8:16 PM
Lets make a trade, I will give you our rain, you give Canada, the heat and you!! :)
Ricci Avatar
May 8, 2017 at 7:37 AM
Good Morning Arthur. It was an honor turning to your page this morning. Your words truly exceed the emotive factor. This is wonderful and it appears you have a cherished friendship with Eileen. Your words are poetry in every way. Well done in its entirety. Enjoy the morning and day.
Vaso Avatar
May 14, 2017 at 8:15 PM
Thank you, I do not know Eileen well, I only know she is a kind soul whose poetry is honest, romantic, raw and it speaks to me! :)
White Avatar
May 7, 2017 at 12:32 AM
This is beautiful, and so very relatable. I only wish if we could share that pain, that we could somehow diminish it. I like the wish that tears would fall on fertile soil, and grow happiness there. And Eileen, if it is in any way possible, I would do as Art does, and cry my tears as seeds of hope into your heart. And create the most beautiful rainbow, together with him.
Vaso Avatar
May 14, 2017 at 8:13 PM
You have a heart of Gold Darren, you really do!
White Avatar
May 9, 2017 at 12:22 PM
You heart is not empty, you may think it is, but that's not true, my friend.
Dietrich Avatar
May 7, 2017 at 12:24 AM
Such a sweet and beautiful poem for Eileen. Tailor made for her because of how beautiful it is, Arthur.
Vaso Avatar
May 14, 2017 at 8:12 PM
Yes as are you!
B. Avatar
May 6, 2017 at 5:17 PM
You possess a heart of gold!! Beautiful :)
Vaso Avatar
May 14, 2017 at 8:11 PM
Or coal
Roper Avatar
May 6, 2017 at 4:43 PM
this is beautiful ~*
Vaso Avatar
May 14, 2017 at 8:11 PM
Thank you so much Eve!!
Manassian Avatar
May 6, 2017 at 11:39 AM
Coming back with more words of thanks, dear. How good to know that you can not only sympathize but empathize with me. Bless you for it. I will treasure this gift always.
Vaso Avatar
May 14, 2017 at 8:11 PM
If I can give you a smile, even a small one, even for a small moment, is enough, for you have brought smiles to so many!!
Ella Avatar
May 4, 2017 at 9:38 PM
Your heart shines in your words, Art <3 Hugs to you too!
Vaso Avatar
May 4, 2017 at 11:07 PM
Thank you so much Sara! :)
Downing  Avatar
May 4, 2017 at 3:33 PM
Arthur, what a beautiful heartfelt poem you penned. It touched my heart deeply. Eileen my deepest condolence, you will be in my prayers tonight. God bless...Hugs :)
Vaso Avatar
May 4, 2017 at 11:06 PM
So very kind of you Akkina! thank you
Green Avatar
May 4, 2017 at 6:12 AM
Beautiful and heart touching Arthur. You have shown your heart in this wonderful poem.
Vaso Avatar
May 4, 2017 at 11:06 PM
I may very well have no heart, however I know in my emptiness Eileen has a huge heart as do all of you for your kind words!
Allison Avatar
May 4, 2017 at 3:33 AM
Aww what beautiful compassionate lines for our lovely Eileen, I can see she is very touched by your words. I still have not grieved for my father - it may come one day:-( Hugs Jan xx
Vaso Avatar
May 4, 2017 at 11:03 PM
Sadness is like rain, it will come :(
Manassian Avatar
May 4, 2017 at 12:07 AM
Arthur, you have reached out to me and have brought solace. Bless you, my dear friend...You have been a knight, indeed. :) I have my good days and my bad days....knowing I have friends like you here....that helps me cope. I have no words of thanks because it wouldn't be enough to express my depth of gratitude. I'll just send a heartfelt hug. God bless you, dear one.
Vaso Avatar
May 4, 2017 at 9:43 PM
You have no idea the smiles and joy you bring others, not my words the words of many others, I am happy I could make you smile! Hugs
Coreggia Avatar
May 3, 2017 at 10:12 PM
This is a beautiful and heartfelt poem that is deeply touching. Amitiés
Vaso Avatar
May 4, 2017 at 9:42 PM
Thank you Anne-Marie
Wolf Avatar
May 3, 2017 at 9:18 PM
Wowza! Your words are woven wonderfully in this piece, Art! I do hope she gets to read this! A very emotive write!
Vaso Avatar
May 4, 2017 at 9:41 PM
I am sure she will, and you are kind to come and read!
Smith Avatar
May 3, 2017 at 9:15 PM
Such a beautiful and compassionate poem for our dear friend.
Vaso Avatar
May 4, 2017 at 9:40 PM
She is dear indeed!
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