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Watercolor Nightmare

Pardon for fingers Body painting my fixed face— Marking up a scene Of raw phantasms that look Like they're falling for my tears.

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/12/2023 2:20:00 PM

Scary imagery!

Hiya Sharma

Date: 10/12/2023 6:27:00 AM

Woah, this tanka is absolutely brilliant and especially the title 'watercolor nightmare' that's so innovative dear poetess! Your wordplay is so eloquent and reflects the depth of feelings.. "Raw phantasms that look like they're falling for my tears" Wow, you've expressed so much within such few words and also sticking to the syllable count so perfectly.. I absolutely loved reading this. Profound!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/12/2023 1:51:00 AM

What a beautiful tanka. Such emotions do you credit. Blessings.

Ink Empress

Date: 10/12/2023 1:43:00 AM

Whoa such deep emotions and thoughts you always express! I absolutely love this tanka beautiful soul! You are truly a gifted soul! And i love the flow too of your words. You should next try a cinquain, check our contests section youll find my cinquain contest. I hope to see you write something! I especially love the title of this! Excellent! Keep shining always!

Paige Hind
Date: 10/12/2023 1:40:00 PM

:) Thanks for the suggestion.