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Watercolor

heedless sky above
crystal mirror below
clouds float through



10. Jan . 2022
(Haiku- Basho style)



A Hiku Premier Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Brian Strand.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/16/2025 6:03:00 AM

I like this one and the photo used to bring a clarity to the work. Thanks for sharing both with us. I appreciate your visit to my page, Valsa. This has been a year with plentiful figs, but because of so much rain when they start to ripen, they taste fermented. I tried to eat some the other day, and they were not good. Sara K

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/10/2022 5:58:00 PM

Precisely! Picture-Poetry perfection! ~ Gershon

Valsa George
Date: 1/10/2022 10:01:00 PM

Thanks a lot dear Gershon if you feel so !

Bill Baker

Date: 1/10/2022 4:37:00 PM

Beautiful imagery and reflective picture, Valsa. Good luck in the contest. Hugs, Bill

Valsa George
Date: 1/10/2022 10:00:00 PM

Bill, you are always gentle and nice even in your comments ! Thanks a lot !

Marshall Iftekhar Ahmed

Date: 1/10/2022 2:33:00 PM

I didn't have to visualize your serene scenic Basho, in my mind! you attached a perfect picture with it! "Heedless" beautifully applied word! Thanks - Marshall ( All the best in the contest)

Valsa George
Date: 1/10/2022 9:59:00 PM

Sorry, I didn't give you a chance to visualize ! I am sure you would have visualized a more beautiful scene... (just joking) Thank you Marshall for your wonderful response !

Rico Leffanta

Date: 1/10/2022 10:25:00 AM

Nice imagery that leaves me wondering if clouds float or drift? Aloha!

Valsa George
Date: 1/10/2022 9:56:00 PM

Clouds float.... also drift as we walk and move ! :) Thanks !

Paghunda Zahid

Date: 1/10/2022 9:28:00 AM

What a picture you have chosen, and what a picture you have drawn... Great penned

Valsa George
Date: 1/10/2022 9:54:00 PM

Much grateful for your kind visit and your acknowledgement Paghunda !

Supraja Kannan

Date: 1/10/2022 8:25:00 AM

How beautiful!!! Such a sweet haiku... Enjoyed reading it and it reads like a winner...

Valsa George
Date: 1/10/2022 9:53:00 PM

Thanks a lot Supraja.... ! Glad you enjoyed !

Anil Deo

Date: 1/10/2022 7:55:00 AM

Thanx for correcting my typo. Shalom shalom VG

Valsa George
Date: 1/10/2022 9:52:00 PM

Most welcome dear brother.... ! Typos are quite possible especially when we are in a hurry !

Joe Dimino

Date: 1/10/2022 7:24:00 AM

Heedless sky...crystal water...and people in the far off distance, not to spoil anything. Very beautiful and tranquil! This in fact would make a lovely study for a watercolor. Joe.

Valsa George
Date: 1/10/2022 9:50:00 PM

You have made it more beautiful with your great comment ! Thanks a lot Joe !