Water Strider

Dancing on water,
With swirls of blissful motion;
Aquatic ballet.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Chu Avatar
June 30, 2009 at 12:08 AM
Nice write, Raul. I can even see what happens next. Enters the frog...
Buys Avatar
June 28, 2009 at 12:15 PM
What a wonderful and vivid picture you paint. Awesome. Regards Heidie
Fraser Avatar
June 28, 2009 at 12:00 PM
Raul, when i read this, i could see water skipping spiders going about their daily business, excellent>>James
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