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Water Strider

Dancing on water, With swirls of blissful motion; Aquatic ballet.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Date: 6/30/2009 12:08:00 AM
Nice write, Raul. I can even see what happens next. Enters the frog...
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Date: 6/28/2009 12:15:00 PM
What a wonderful and vivid picture you paint. Awesome. Regards Heidie
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Date: 6/28/2009 12:00:00 PM
Raul, when i read this, i could see water skipping spiders going about their daily business, excellent>>James
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