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They call me the Water Oak. My roots are strong and wet. No rain or wind or outside force has hindered my growth yet. I was planted by the river to nourish from its source to be the keen observer at this juncture of its course. For centuries I’ve labored with my black and twisted girth burdened by great and weighty limbs that sag to Earth. You might call me cumbersome, ugly in my form. But I am as the Tree of Life from mankind’s early dawn. In the forest and the swamp, I’ve ruled for many years and as green moss does cover me, I shed the aging tears. Oh, see my grand reflection in the silver water’s glow as I rest on ground untouchable by the river’s flow. 3/12/20

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Date: 3/23/2020 10:55:00 AM
A majestic poem truly worthy of your recent contest wins, dear Janis. The personification of a mighty, timeless, monarch of an oak tree oozes with confidence and self-assuredness in its place in life, inspiring us to reach for that same plateau of dignity, to be an exemplar to the world around us. Your words flow and rhyme so poetically. Well done! ! John
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Date: 3/14/2020 4:05:00 PM
A powerful direct approach, Janis, much enjoyed your entertaining write--beautiful and well-worth being in 1st place, my thanks for your participation, Aloha, William
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Janis Thompson
Date: 3/19/2020 7:58:00 AM
Thanks for your honored placement in an inventive contest. Aloha nui.
Date: 3/14/2020 12:51:00 PM
Your poem is as majestic as your oak,Janis!
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Janis Thompson
Date: 3/19/2020 7:59:00 AM
Thanks and blessing to you Ralph.
Date: 3/12/2020 6:11:00 PM
Hello Janis Thompson, no this tree is not ugly. it is a beautiful tree that grows in the water. I like this tree.Have a nice evening my friend.
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