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Water Journey

A journey, water brought to me In the shallows and depths to be My soul was floating on a ride Clear water leaves nothing to hide Emotions churned like waves at sea From where the river carried me Then upon me, was a changing tide Clear water leaves nothing to hide A past calm lake in memory Returned in vision, I could see It released stagnant troubles inside Clear water leaves nothing to hide I take journeys to cleanse and flee With all kinds of water, I’m free I’ll find myself with all untied Clear water leaves nothing to hide Heidi Sands 8/2722

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 9/6/2022 9:13:00 AM

This kyrielle poem is beautiful, i wish lots of luck in the contest my friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/6/2022 9:21:00 AM

Thank you Jennifer. I appreciate your visits and support. I hope all is well. Blessings :)

Joseph May

Date: 8/27/2022 5:22:00 PM

I love this Heidi, great refrain, Very nicely written

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/28/2022 5:52:00 AM

I am happy to hear that Joseph. Thank you for the visit and kind feedback :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/27/2022 3:18:00 PM

Beautiful write in this hard to execute form, Heidi. I felt the emotions blended with journey through nature.

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/27/2022 3:36:00 PM

Thank you Vijay. Your feedback and support is always appreciated. I hope you have a nice evening :)

Frederic Parker

Date: 8/27/2022 1:06:00 PM

Well done poet, this is a poem that should do well...goodluck

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/27/2022 1:07:00 PM

Thank you Frederic . It is nice to see you and I appreciate your encouraging comment. :)