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Water Dragons

The roll of the waves hides the arcs of their backs. The shoal of porpoises are feeding on squid. Feasting amongst them on cephalopod snacks Are green-scaled dragons that choose to be hid. They hide from whalers and their brutal harpoons, While they stay in the ocean for most of life's times, Except times when they roam the nearby sand dunes To covet Marsh Radishes and the wild limes. These dragons don't fly, since they're aquatic sorts. Like Nessie in Scotland, they wish to be free. Some people catch a glimpse, and some hear a snort, But rarely, since mostly they're way out to sea.

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Date: 3/6/2024 5:25:00 PM
thanks for friendly feedback. your poems are cool too. be well.
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 3/6/2024 8:07:00 PM
Thank you for stopping by.
Date: 3/1/2024 11:04:00 AM
Hilda! A unque and charming write, wth advebture! Your mind was on full throttle here. You stimulateour minds to think out of the ordinary, Pangie
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 3/1/2024 4:19:00 PM
Thank you. A little fantasy occasionally.
Date: 2/28/2024 5:46:00 AM
You have brought the marine life with all its variety! Sea creatures are amazingly varied! Some of them cannot be sighted as they live deep down the ocean bed. Lovely poem, dear Hilda !
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 2/28/2024 2:24:00 PM
I hope to hear about the creatures deep in the ocean bed. Will you write? I thank you for enjoying my poem.
Date: 2/24/2024 5:02:00 PM
We have our own water dragon in Kelowna. They call him Ogopogo. He lives in lake Okanagan. I enjoyed your poem.
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 2/24/2024 6:13:00 PM
Thank you for commenting. I hope your dragon doesn't bite.
Date: 2/24/2024 3:47:00 PM
With great ingenuity and artistry, you have crafted a captivating and otherworldly realm within the depths of the sea.
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 2/24/2024 4:13:00 PM
Thank you. I appreciate your opinion.
Date: 2/24/2024 5:43:00 AM
Enchanting, fantastical dimension to sea-world you have created. I doubt that I will ever sit on the shore, and look out on the ocean again without a camera nearby, wanting to be first. Enjoyed this work very much. Blessings.
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 2/24/2024 10:02:00 AM
Thank you for your interest. If you don't see the dragons, the porpoises make a good photograph, too.
Date: 2/23/2024 11:40:00 AM
Very creative and well put together.
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 2/23/2024 1:58:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 2/22/2024 6:41:00 PM
This is well researched and excellently penned :)
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 2/22/2024 7:33:00 PM
Lol. And a lot of fantasy. Thank you for enjoying it.
Date: 2/22/2024 9:14:00 AM
Dear Hilda, your captivating poem is beautifully expressed. Your fantastic imagery creates a mythical, mystical creature "The roll of the waves hides the arcs of their backs" and "They hide from whalers and their brutal harpoons" and "Some people catch a glimpse, and some hear a snort" - let's hope they always stay out to sea where they can be hidden yet free. Wonderful whimsical poetry! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 2/22/2024 9:55:00 AM
Thank you. Your generous comments lift my spirits. I hoped to change the dragon in this poem from a fire breathing menace to something more approachable. I'll eventually write a bad dragon, but not today.
Date: 2/20/2024 4:46:00 PM
I really enjoyed this poem Hilda. Great rhyme scheme. I think my favorite line is "To covet Marsh Radishes and the wild limes." Nessie is the Loch Ness I'm guessing.
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 2/20/2024 5:59:00 PM
Thank you. Yes, I did spice it up a bit with the reference to Loch Ness. Should I hang my head in shame? It is Chinese Year of the Dragon, so I hope to connect with this year.
Date: 2/20/2024 2:04:00 AM
Oh wow, this is such a profound poem from your elegant quill, beautiful Hilda..I love the theme and how wonderfully you've made your lines stand above, by giving them an intricate artistic touch..Perfectly crafted imagery with impeccable phrases and especially, I enjoyed reading this because I'm an admirer of fantasy writes, so this one is absolutely mystical to read. I remember as a kid I used to write many short stories too, your piece made me reminisce those days :) sending best wishes & love
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 2/20/2024 10:33:00 AM
Thank you for reading. I think most poems have an element of fantasy. Simply written, like the Red Diamond, I'm thinking of putting some of these in a children's book of poems.
Date: 2/19/2024 8:39:00 PM
Very intriguing poetry, Hilda. Great rhyming and an interesting read. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 2/19/2024 9:52:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words, Bill. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 2/18/2024 10:23:00 PM
Ah beautiful poem this is dear hilda! As always a unique concept again, and something that flows in such a lyrical manner, i love the uniqueness of your diction and how you’ve phrased too. I love dragon stories especially, have read few in the past. And your poem here is inspiring me to write another: sending you light always . And yes it is the year of dragons and chinese new year just passed. Perfect timing for the poem too.
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 2/18/2024 11:29:00 PM
Thanks you for your comments and compliments. This is my second dragon story on this site. The fantasy write is fun.
Date: 2/18/2024 8:04:00 PM
An interesting and fascinating poem, Hilda. I learned a lot.
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 2/18/2024 8:40:00 PM
Thank you for your comments. The fantasy of dragons captures my imagination.
Date: 2/18/2024 3:51:00 PM
Hilda, this is a lot of fun. I was watching a video on Chinese water dragons, which I searched for because of your poem, but I think you are writing about something bigger and more exotic. However, a dragon of any kind makes for an interesting exploration.
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 2/18/2024 4:03:00 PM
Thanks for following this poem. I also looked it up after posting. My dragon is pure fiction, so not like the small lizards. Chinese mythical dragons come in five types, which I believe are Fire, water, earth, metal, and wood. This year is the year of the wood dragon.
Date: 2/18/2024 10:15:00 AM
I know there are various aquatic mammals in the sea but never heard of aquatic dragons. One lives and learns.
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 2/18/2024 10:37:00 AM
Dragons are as real as they have been in the past. Thank you for your comment. (Dragons are similar to alligators, so more like reptiles.)
Date: 2/18/2024 3:38:00 AM
Another elusive creature of the deep, Very nicely penned
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 2/18/2024 6:46:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 2/17/2024 8:09:00 PM
Enjoyed your intriguing and informative poem, Hilda. Thanks, gw
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/21/2024 6:28:00 PM
It didn't 'drag on' at all. Really like it.
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 2/17/2024 8:14:00 PM
Thanks for stopping by. I'm glad you enjoyed my latest dragon poem.
Date: 2/17/2024 5:11:00 PM
Dear Hilda, The imagery in the first verse is stunning - the hidden dragons feasting among the porpoises, their green scales glimpsed beneath the rolling waves. It's like finding a secret world within our own. I love the contrast between these mythical creatures and their down-to-earth cravings for marsh radishes and limes. It makes them feel both fantastical and oddly relatable. The poem beautifully leaves us wondering about these elusive creatures, sparking our imaginations. Hilda, this is a poem that will stay with me long after reading it. - Blessings, Daniel
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 2/17/2024 5:21:00 PM
Thank you very much for your comments. This is my second dragon poem. This is the Chinese Year of the Dragon, so I thought it would be a good subject.
Date: 2/17/2024 4:44:00 PM
captivating and engaging poem, Hilda! Your rhymes flowed and your descriptive words were spot on! I especially liked, "feasting amongst them on cephalopod snacks Are green-scaled dragons that choose to be hid This poem reminds me a little bit of Grendel in Beowulf...it's that good. Have a great evening, Sara
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 2/17/2024 4:59:00 PM
Thank you very much. Olde English poetry is one style that amazes me. Double thanks.
Date: 2/17/2024 3:35:00 PM
I like it. I am a believer in cryptids like Nessie, even though I have never seen one!
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 2/17/2024 4:17:00 PM
Thank you for your comment. I have one other dragon poem, Replenished, so I thought it was about time to write another. And this is the year of the Dragon.

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