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Water and Sky

Not very far above the rippled reverie, lives the harvest moon bright and aglow- Three stars gazing for the world to see, while the tidal waves crash and flow. The moon dust sprinkles and falls below, catching sights of the bridged undertow. The magic of the night stares into the abyss, the constellations shine with hope and flair- Aries and Taurus begin to romantically kiss, and can't even see me lying there. Am I the only one to see, the only to care? As I gently wisp my lover's chestnut hair. The night shall linger into morn's dew, tomorrow shall bring a brand-new day- Silent nights like this are found very few, for I see Mother Nature in a whole new way. Oh, I wish this harvest moon would stay, and shine upon the rippled reverie...I pray. Water and Sky Poetry Contest Sponsor: Gregory R. Barden January 2, 2018

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Date: 1/30/2018 10:33:00 PM
This is an excellent poem Laura. Great rhyme scheme and stays on topic while painting a clear and beautiful picture. Good Write, Wayne
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Date: 1/25/2018 6:54:00 PM
Such beautiful imagery, Laura, and wonderful rhythm and rhymes. Congratulations on your win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/25/2018 1:53:00 PM
Very pretty, Laura. Congratulations! ...Fran
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Date: 1/25/2018 1:16:00 PM
Charming romance. Congrats on your win, Laura. Well done.
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Date: 1/24/2018 10:43:00 AM
Finishes with a sigh, gorgeous! Wonderful pen Luloo, congratulations on your win :) xomo!
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Date: 1/24/2018 9:06:00 AM
Beautiful atmospheric imagery, Laura.
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Date: 1/24/2018 5:57:00 AM
This is exquisite, Luloo, and stood out with its structure and phrasing and flow ... such wonderful imagery and expression! Blessings and congrats on your EIGHTH PLACE! Thank you so much for entering my contest! :-)
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Date: 1/2/2018 6:27:00 PM
It's like you wrap yourself in beautiful words.
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Date: 1/3/2018 4:58:00 AM
awww thank you sweet Sunlite ;) -luloo

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