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WATER AND LOVE:  A TANKA DUO LESSON

Water has its ways,
always disappearing, and
always returning:
Evaporating to leave,
and condensing to return:-

No need to worry,
that which you may feel dissolved,
will always be there:
Like water, supreme love is
willed to condense in our hearts:-

Water has its ways, always disappearing, and always returning: Evaporating to leave, and condensing to return:- No need to worry, that which you may feel dissolved, will always be there: Like water, supreme love is willed to condense in our hearts:-

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Date: 2/19/2025 3:07:00 AM
Yes,these are the ways of nature.Very nice.
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Date: 2/19/2025 2:23:00 PM
Thanks, Akham; nature's baptizing love. One. Peace and love.

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