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WATER

Old river-thought murmurs —I slip— not away, but into the hush between what holds and what lets go— a spine of light bending softly from mist to depth. I remember stillness: cupped hands at morning prayer, a silence shaped like longing filling with the cool of grace. Listen— I dwell in every pause you mistook for end. Your name—rippled through me, again and again, a hymn undone by echo. Yet I am no hymn. I am the silence after— unclinging— and the weightless reach. See how the lily leans, not in sorrow but surrender— a slow bow to sky-drip, a soft unfolding. Where I flow is not escape but return. The fall is not forsaking. The fall is how I carry you home.

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Date: 6/8/2025 9:21:00 PM
Let me also repeat after Andrea... 'gorgeous poetry'.... having the width and depth of water.
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Date: 5/29/2025 12:42:00 PM
gorgeous poetry!
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Date: 5/28/2025 9:33:00 PM
Gently Powerful, like water. Loved it. Beautiful lines > how the lily leans, not in sorrow but surrender// the fall is how I carry you home : exquisite ending > ver insightful. ThkU
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Date: 5/28/2025 1:37:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful and powerful "WATER" write. Have a fun day writing away..........
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Date: 5/28/2025 10:52:00 AM
- The line about the lily captured me ... a lovely poem, Jay :) - hugs
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Date: 5/28/2025 10:41:00 AM
I love this line best, Jay, "Listen— I dwell in every pause you mistook for end. Your name—rippled through me, again and again, a hymn undone by echo" it is important to listen and not be mistaken ~ Anaya
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