WATER

Old river-thought murmurs 
 —I slip— 
  not away, but into the hush between 
  what holds and what lets go— 
 a spine of light bending softly 
   from mist to depth. 

I remember stillness: 
  cupped hands at morning prayer, 
  a silence shaped like longing 
  filling with the cool of grace. 

Listen— 
  I dwell in every pause you mistook for end. 
 Your name—rippled 
  through me, again and again, 
  a hymn undone by echo. 

Yet I am no hymn. 
 I am the silence after— 
  unclinging— 
   and the weightless reach. 

See how the lily leans, not in sorrow 
 but surrender— 
  a slow bow to sky-drip, 
  a soft 
   unfolding. 

Where I flow is not escape 
  but return. 
 The fall is not forsaking. 
 The fall is 
  how I carry 
    you home.
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George Avatar
June 8, 2025 at 9:21 PM
Let me also repeat after Andrea... 'gorgeous poetry'.... having the width and depth of water.
Dietrich Avatar
May 29, 2025 at 12:42 PM
gorgeous poetry!
Daniels Avatar
May 28, 2025 at 9:33 PM
Gently Powerful, like water. Loved it. Beautiful lines > how the lily leans, not in sorrow but surrender// the fall is how I carry you home : exquisite ending > ver insightful. ThkU
Goldsmith Avatar
May 28, 2025 at 1:37 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful and powerful "WATER" write. Have a fun day writing away..........
Andresen Avatar
May 28, 2025 at 10:52 AM
- The line about the lily captured me ... a lovely poem, Jay :) - hugs
Anaya Avatar
May 28, 2025 at 10:41 AM
I love this line best, Jay, "Listen— I dwell in every pause you mistook for end. Your name—rippled through me, again and again, a hymn undone by echo" it is important to listen and not be mistaken ~ Anaya
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