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Watching the vast ocean Water level go up Where tidal force comes in Weather change or the moon Without rain no rich crops Wonder what we would do Will our bodies hold up? 5/9/2021 Pleiades W Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Kim Merryman

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Date: 5/20/2021 9:47:00 AM
Eve, congrats on your win with this thoughtful piece. Janice
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Date: 5/14/2021 6:30:00 PM
Hi Eve, A superb entry and matching placement. Well done. Howard
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Date: 5/14/2021 1:02:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Wish I was in your picture by the water. Have a blessed day/weekend.................
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Date: 5/13/2021 10:21:00 PM
You pose an interesting question-- where would we be without water? Clearly it is essential as your poem gives examples. Congratulations!
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Date: 5/12/2021 9:40:00 PM
Yes, water is very important. There are so many under developed countries with little water resources. Congratulations, Eve. Have a good night.
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Date: 5/12/2021 2:01:00 AM
- Water is more important than we think, Eve :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/11/2021 2:47:00 PM
It's all about nature. And the ocean is a major player!! Big congrats on your win. Fine writing, Eve.
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Date: 5/11/2021 1:53:00 PM
Eve, I like how you showed the value of water! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 5/10/2021 8:19:00 AM
We take water too much for granted, Eve, and many people have little respect for it, even if it of utmost importance for everyone. ~ Your lovely poems is food for thought. ~ Hugs // paul
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Date: 5/9/2021 12:05:00 PM
Hello Ever Roper, whether humans or animals we need the water so does the earth need the water. Enjoy your Mother's Day. Hugs Darlene
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Date: 5/9/2021 6:11:00 AM
This world is in ruins and needs to be saved.
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