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Water

If You Try to Catch the Water It will Slips out of Your hand gradually.. And If You Keep that water in a Container for a long time It will become dirty and smelly.. If You drink that water In a short Span, It will calm your burning soul thrist But, it will not last for a long time... Then, What You should do with 'The Water' ? I say! "Let it flow with in the boundaries" Take care of it, Love it and Let it live too... Only then, He will never left you alone And you don't have to put chains around it.

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Date: 4/24/2021 11:55:00 AM
Hello Kuljit Kuar, so nice to meet you. right you can not chain the water. Instead let it flow freely. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Kuljit Kaur
Date: 4/25/2021 10:47:00 PM
Thanku so much...i just thought to relate the water to the love relationship and somehow these lines originated n my mind..thanks alot fr the comment. I really appreciate it..tc my friend..keep smiling
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/25/2021 5:37:00 AM
Kuljot, welcome to Poetry Soup. Enjoy your day.

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