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Once upon a time You were here with me We were two of us We were side by side Wished upon a star I will ask God To hold you tight, Give you a kiss for me, at night Reflections Your spirit I can see, you my sister Twin a fictional tale, although based upon actual events 6/14/22

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Bill Baker

Date: 7/6/2022 7:44:00 AM

Fictional or fact, the love and sincerity come clearly through. A touching poem from a sensitive poetess. Thanks for sharing my friend. Hugs, Bill

I Am Anaya
Date: 7/6/2022 12:08:00 PM

Thank you, Bill for your kind comment and compliment. I was reflecting on the human heart and soul and one connectivity to each other. Hugs Anaya

Valsa George

Date: 6/19/2022 12:24:00 AM

A fictional poem, encasing natural sentiments ! If we lose someone so close, following us everywhere like a shadow, we will be deeply saddened once taken away. What we can do is just pray.... ! All the Best in the contest, Anaya

I Am Anaya
Date: 6/19/2022 11:10:00 AM

Thank you, Valsa...My nieces are twins and are inseparable to this day. My uncle and aunti also twins! Many have lost a twin at birth, and it's a sad thing. Elvis being one!

Deb M

Date: 6/15/2022 8:32:00 AM

Oh Anaya I am so so sorry to hear that ….how very painful for you. Your poem made me feel really sad…I am truly sorry for your loss….sending cuddles. Debxxx

I Am Anaya
Date: 6/15/2022 11:39:00 AM

a fictional tale, although based upon actual events, thanks so much for your concern, Deb

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/15/2022 7:25:00 AM

A verse from the heart Anaya, I'm sorry for your loss. Tom

I Am Anaya
Date: 6/15/2022 11:40:00 AM

a fictional tale, although based upon actual events, thanks so much for your concern, Tom

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/15/2022 1:34:00 AM

From the title I surmise you lost your twin sister. Hope I got it wrong. I would love to see you happy.

I Am Anaya
Date: 6/15/2022 11:40:00 AM

a fictional tale, although based upon actual events, thanks so much for your concern, Victor

Robert Gorelick

Date: 6/14/2022 8:23:00 PM

Priceless enchanted sentiment, may the risen sun, send, warm waves of mellow mist to brighten your path. Robert

I Am Anaya
Date: 6/15/2022 11:30:00 AM

May rainbows, and miles of smiles grace your day! Thank you, Robert

Chris Con

Date: 6/14/2022 8:12:00 PM

Nicely mused. Caren will be a bit biased towards its premise. In other words: you already won.

I Am Anaya
Date: 6/15/2022 11:24:00 AM

Thank you, Chris, lol. If I make the list, I'm sure it'll be due to my writing.

L Milton Hankins

Date: 6/14/2022 7:32:00 PM

Anaya, this is simply beautiful and heartfelt, and I wish you the very best in Caren's contest.

I Am Anaya
Date: 6/15/2022 11:25:00 AM

Thank you, Milton, much appreciated!