I Am Anaya Poet Diminished Hexaverse

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Watching You Without Me

Once upon a time
You were here with me 
We were two of us
We were side by side
Wished upon a star

I will ask God 
To hold you tight,
Give you a kiss
for me, at night

Reflections
Your spirit
I can see,

you my
sister

Twin

a fictional tale, although based upon actual events

6/14/22

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Bill Baker July 6, 2022 at 7:44 AM Fictional or fact, the love and sincerity come clearly through. A touching poem from a sensitive poetess. Thanks for sharing my friend. Hugs, Bill I Am Anaya July 6, 2022 at 12:08 PM Thank you, Bill for your kind comment and compliment. I was reflecting on the human heart and soul and one connectivity to each other. Hugs Anaya

Valsa George June 19, 2022 at 12:24 AM A fictional poem, encasing natural sentiments ! If we lose someone so close, following us everywhere like a shadow, we will be deeply saddened once taken away. What we can do is just pray.... ! All the Best in the contest, Anaya I Am Anaya June 19, 2022 at 11:10 AM Thank you, Valsa...My nieces are twins and are inseparable to this day. My uncle and aunti also twins! Many have lost a twin at birth, and it's a sad thing. Elvis being one!

Tom Cunningham June 15, 2022 at 7:25 AM A verse from the heart Anaya, I'm sorry for your loss. Tom I Am Anaya June 15, 2022 at 11:40 AM a fictional tale, although based upon actual events, thanks so much for your concern, Tom

Victor Buhagiar June 15, 2022 at 1:34 AM From the title I surmise you lost your twin sister. Hope I got it wrong. I would love to see you happy. I Am Anaya June 15, 2022 at 11:40 AM a fictional tale, although based upon actual events, thanks so much for your concern, Victor

Robert Gorelick June 14, 2022 at 8:23 PM Priceless enchanted sentiment, may the risen sun, send, warm waves of mellow mist to brighten your path. Robert I Am Anaya June 15, 2022 at 11:30 AM May rainbows, and miles of smiles grace your day! Thank you, Robert

Chris Conn June 14, 2022 at 8:12 PM Nicely mused. Caren will be a bit biased towards its premise. In other words: you already won. I Am Anaya June 15, 2022 at 11:24 AM Thank you, Chris, lol. If I make the list, I'm sure it'll be due to my writing.

L Milton Hankins June 14, 2022 at 7:32 PM Anaya, this is simply beautiful and heartfelt, and I wish you the very best in Caren's contest. I Am Anaya June 15, 2022 at 11:25 AM Thank you, Milton, much appreciated!