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making the most of every single day a rightful tribute to your loved one he who passed with love on his very last breath refusing to be a burden his most ardent desire to have you enjoy your much deserved freedom when life’s so short though painful to be a widow you would eventually learn he would stay ever so near leaving you subtle signals of his presence as he watches over you every day and every night AP: Honorable mention 2022 Submitted on January 28, 2022 for contest A STRAND (1061) sponsored by BRIAN STRAND Originally posted on March 9, 2018

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Mike Gentile

Date: 3/12/2018 12:21:00 PM

Such beautiful melancholy in your poem, Line, portraying a rich, deep love !!

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/12/2018 1:23:00 PM

Thank you so much, Mike, for your wonderful visit and comment.

Melissa Tracy

Date: 3/11/2018 6:08:00 AM

Beautiful write and dedication to your loved one, Line...a part of them will always live on through you..signs from loved ones are so comforting...best wishes

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/11/2018 10:39:00 AM

Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Melissa. Much appreciated.

Niall Fulham

Date: 3/9/2018 1:38:00 PM

Hi Line , beautiful emotional write , feeling the presence is powerful my friend ::) hugs

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/9/2018 3:06:00 PM

Thank you so much for your visit and comment, Niall. Much appreciate.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/9/2018 1:15:00 PM

Beautiful tribute Line, and their spirit and fond memories stay with you. Tom

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/9/2018 1:17:00 PM

Thank you for your lovely visit and comment, Tom.