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behold heart contractions appear in consciousness it shouldn’t be so but is leaving us astonished so we witness tremors just looking nonchalantly the thought’s self-conscious feels lonesome since it is unfed it is a standoff in time stretched silence the imaginary bubble of delusion bursts noiselessly in the void for it’s existence depends upon our attention betwixt the ebb and flow waves of bliss cascade within dynamic stillness envelopes being ever tranquil 04-January-2023

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Date: 1/3/2023 8:28:00 PM
"betwixt the ebb and flow waves of bliss cascade within dynamic stillness envelopes being"..... Such moments are rare, far in between and drop like manna from Heaven !
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Date: 1/3/2023 9:28:00 PM
Indeed it is ~ thank you, Valsa

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