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Watch Out For Grandma

as if she knew kids were not around, she got up the board, without a sound. statuesque, she surfs with ease, self-taught hun, she aims to please, her younger self, would've won a crowd. 14 July 2022 Limerick Poetry Contest Sponsored by Lisa YY 99779 syllable count

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Date: 7/20/2022 6:44:00 AM
Younger self. Great! Congratulations!
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Izintombi Zamambo
Date: 7/21/2022 1:13:00 AM
Thank you, God Bless!!!
Date: 7/19/2022 6:12:00 AM
Aha, it’s like dancing then… surf like there’s no else there. Congratulations, Izintombi
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Izintombi Zamambo
Date: 7/19/2022 7:13:00 AM
Surf like you're about to float in the air!! Haha, thank you so much!!! God Bless!!!
Date: 7/19/2022 5:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Izintombi! Linda
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Izintombi Zamambo
Date: 7/19/2022 7:12:00 AM
Thank you, thank you!! God Bless Linda!! Z
Date: 7/19/2022 4:15:00 AM
You go, Grandma! Congratulations!
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Izintombi Zamambo
Date: 7/19/2022 4:29:00 AM
Thank you so much Kim!!! God Bless!!!
Date: 7/18/2022 9:46:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... delightful and delighting from the start 'til the end. God bless you.
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Izintombi Zamambo
Date: 7/19/2022 1:47:00 AM
Thank you so much!!! GOD BLESS YOU!!!
Date: 7/15/2022 11:07:00 AM
WOW Inzintombi! Amazing for your first. I have written several and struggle every time lol.
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Izintombi Zamambo
Date: 7/15/2022 11:47:00 AM
In actuality, I've been struggling too, this was my second attempt at "perfecting" a Limerick but this is my first submission of one. It really takes practice and I can't say it's easy, but truelly worth it!!! God Bless!!!
Date: 7/14/2022 10:48:00 AM
Great! very nice limerick
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Izintombi Zamambo
Date: 7/14/2022 10:52:00 AM
It's my first attempt! Thank you so much!

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