Izintombi Zamambo Poet Limerick

Watch Out For Grandma

as if she knew kids were not around,
she got up the board, without a sound. 
statuesque, she surfs with ease,
self-taught hun, she aims to please,
her younger self, would've won a crowd. 

14 July 2022
Limerick Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Lisa YY
99779 syllable count

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Christuraj Alex July 20, 2022 at 6:44 AM Younger self. Great! Congratulations! Izintombi Zamambo July 21, 2022 at 1:13 AM Thank you, God Bless!!!

Terry Flood July 19, 2022 at 6:12 AM Aha, it’s like dancing then… surf like there’s no else there. Congratulations, Izintombi Izintombi Zamambo July 19, 2022 at 7:13 AM Surf like you're about to float in the air!! Haha, thank you so much!!! God Bless!!!

Linda Alice Fowler July 19, 2022 at 5:35 AM Congratulations on your win Izintombi! Linda Izintombi Zamambo July 19, 2022 at 7:12 AM Thank you, thank you!! God Bless Linda!! Z

Kim Rodrigues July 19, 2022 at 4:15 AM You go, Grandma! Congratulations! Izintombi Zamambo July 19, 2022 at 4:29 AM Thank you so much Kim!!! God Bless!!!

Beata Agustin July 18, 2022 at 9:46 PM Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... delightful and delighting from the start 'til the end. God bless you. Izintombi Zamambo July 19, 2022 at 1:47 AM Thank you so much!!! GOD BLESS YOU!!!

FJ Thomas July 15, 2022 at 11:07 AM WOW Inzintombi! Amazing for your first. I have written several and struggle every time lol. Izintombi Zamambo July 15, 2022 at 11:47 AM In actuality, I've been struggling too, this was my second attempt at "perfecting" a Limerick but this is my first submission of one. It really takes practice and I can't say it's easy, but truelly worth it!!! God Bless!!!

Jeff Kyser July 14, 2022 at 10:48 AM Great! very nice limerick Izintombi Zamambo July 14, 2022 at 10:52 AM It's my first attempt! Thank you so much!