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Watch Out Big Foot

Our home came from an old apple tree,
the storm came and we had to flee.
We still make honey for brie,
all my wonderful siblings and me.
I am the youngest yellow bee,
my family is filled with glee.
Watch out where you are walking big foot,
you will make our home go caput.

Copyright © Paula Goldsmith | Year Posted 2024

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Sara Kendrick Date: 8/18/2024 10:26:00 AM Delightful to see your nursery rhyme on the winners' list. Way to go. Congratulations to you. Sara K Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 10/5/2024 10:11:00 AM Thanks for your note and for your Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed reading my fun "Big Foot" write again. "So Sorry" I do Not know how I missed your wonderful comment. It is always great to see you. Have a fun day writing away.................

Paula Goldsmith Date: 8/18/2024 8:41:00 AM "1 Place" ~ Watch Out Big Foot ~ Date Written: 7/26/2024 Login to Reply

Len Gasun Date: 8/17/2024 8:24:00 PM Coming back to Congratulate you on your first place win my dear poet friend! Hugs Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 8/18/2024 8:41:00 AM Thanks for your note and for your Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed reading my "Big Foot" write again. It is always great to see you. Hugs...  Have a fun day writing away.................

Mark Toney Date: 8/15/2024 9:39:00 PM Yours is a lovely nursery rhyme, Paula. It’s the bees knees! :) I also wanted to write one for the cute little apple house under foot, but I just couldn’t come up with anything. It’s a delight to read yours. Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 8/18/2024 8:39:00 AM Thanks for your note. Glad you found my fun "Big Foot" write to be a lovely nursery rhyme. I started thinking very small. Ants first came to mind but I did not like the ant idea. Then bees came. That is what I went with. So glad you found it to be a delight to read. Watch out "Big Foot." Have a fun day writing away..........................

Karen Jones Date: 8/15/2024 5:48:00 PM Congratulations on your win in the contest Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 8/18/2024 8:34:00 AM Thanks for your note and for your Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed reading my "Big Foot" write. It was a ton of fun to bring to life. Have a fun day writing away...........................

Speaks Volumes Date: 8/8/2024 3:47:00 PM This nursery rhyme should become a classic Paula. Bees are such meligned critters and kids are usually terrified of them. This is a lovely tribute to make kids love bees. Its gorgeous! Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 8/9/2024 9:29:00 AM Thanks for your note. Glad you found my fun "Big Foot" write to be a lovely tribute to make kids love bees. Its gorgeous! Great to see you/to know you enjoyed my fun write. I could not get the picture to load in. It was so much fun to write. Watch out "Big Foot." Have a fun day writing away..........................

Nancy Kaufman Date: 8/3/2024 1:17:00 PM Paula this is a really cute one. Enjoyed it! Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 8/4/2024 1:30:00 PM Thanks for your note. Glad you found my fun "Big Foot" write to be a really cute one. It was fun to write. Watch out "Big Foot." Have a fun day writing away...........................

Linda Alice Fowler Date: 7/31/2024 3:05:00 PM LOL. What a fun story Paula. We must watch our step lest we squash the little critters in the grass. :) Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 8/1/2024 9:39:00 AM Thanks for your note and for your LOL. Glad you found my fun "Big Foot" write to be a fun story. I enjoyed writing this one. Yes, we must watch our steps in the grass. We never know who lives there. Hahaha!!! Watch out "Big Foot." Have a fun day writing away...........................

Valsa George Date: 7/28/2024 10:23:00 PM Quite an amusing nursery rhyme. The Big Foot is a real threat to the existence of small flies like bees. Beautiful rhyming. Enjoyed it, dear Paula. Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 7/30/2024 9:49:00 AM Thanks for your note. Glad you found my fun "Big Foot" write to be Quite an amusing nursery rhyme. I thought the bees were cute for the apple picture contest. Yes, watch out "Big Foot." Hahaha!!! Have a fun day writing away...........................

Len Gasun Date: 7/28/2024 7:41:00 PM A delighhtful and gorgeous rhyme poem my dearest poet friend Paula. I enjoyed immensely reading it this morning. Thanks a lot for sharing. Sorry for the late visit. I hope you're always doing great dearest friend. Have a great new week! Best wishes to you always. Hugs. Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 7/30/2024 9:45:00 AM Thanks for your note and for your Best wishes. Glad you found my fun "Big Foot" write to be A delightful and gorgeous rhyme poem. Good to see you here. You are never late, right on time. I thought the bees were cute for this apple picture contest.   Have a fun day writing away...............

Hilda Greenhough Date: 7/27/2024 12:54:00 PM If I were a bee, I'd be sad reading this; however, bees are skilled at building anew. Thanks for this cute poem. Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 7/30/2024 9:41:00 AM Thanks for your note. Glad you found my fun "Big Foot" write to be a cute poem. Yes, bees are very skilled at building. They would never use an apple for their home. I thought it was cute for the picture contest.   Have a fun day writing away...............

Ink Empress Date: 7/27/2024 9:18:00 AM I love the rhymes and rhythm of your cute and very creatively written poem dear paula! Fitting for the picture too.. I especially love the ending here. Brilliant! Best wishes and pleasure always reading your work. Sending you light always Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 7/30/2024 9:38:00 AM Thanks for your note and for your Best wishes. Glad you found my fun "Big Foot" write to be very creatively written. I see "Brilliant"??? Thank You, that put a smile on my heart.   Have a fun day writing away...............

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/26/2024 11:38:00 PM Cute take on the picture, dear. Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 7/30/2024 9:34:00 AM Thanks for your note. Glad you found my fun "Big Foot" write to be a Cute take on the picture. Watch out "Big Foot." Hahaha!!! Have a fun day writing away...............

Sara Kendrick Date: 7/26/2024 1:45:00 PM A little humor there to go along with the picture. Enjoyed reading it today. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara K Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 7/30/2024 9:33:00 AM Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed reading my "Big Foot" write. It was a ton of fun to bring to life. Have a fun day writing away...........................

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/26/2024 1:39:00 PM - A pleasure to read ... be careful "big foot" - GL in the contest, Paula :) - hugs Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 7/30/2024 9:31:00 AM Thanks for your note and for your GL in the contest. Glad you found my fun "Big Foot" write to be A pleasure to read. Yes, watch out "Big Foot."  Hahaha!!! Good to see you. Hope you are OK... Hugs... Have a fun day writing away...............

Silent One Date: 7/26/2024 12:38:00 PM They rhymes and flow to this are really good.. Great idea for a poem..Have a lovely day writing.. Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 7/30/2024 9:28:00 AM Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my "Big Foot" write. I enjoyed bringing this one to life. Have a fun day writing away...........................

Joseph May Date: 7/26/2024 11:33:00 AM I enjoyed this fun verse Paula, blessings Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 7/26/2024 12:15:00 PM Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Big Foot" write. I had a ton of fun writing this one. Have a fun day writing away...........................

Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 7/26/2024 11:19:00 AM Hello Paula, yes bigfoot will crush the tiny home of the bee. /Enjoy your day my friend. Hugs. /Darlene/ Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 7/26/2024 12:13:00 PM Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my "Big Foot" write. Yes, watch out... Do Not Crush The Tiny Home. Where would the bees move toooooo??? Hahaha!!! Have a fun day writing away...........................

Paula Goldsmith Date: 7/26/2024 9:56:00 AM Watch Out Big Foot ~ Date Written: 7/26/2024 Login to Reply