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Watch Out Big Foot

Our home came from an old apple tree,
the storm came and we had to flee.
We still make honey for brie,
all my wonderful siblings and me.
I am the youngest yellow bee,
my family is filled with glee.
Watch out where you are walking big foot,
you will make our home go caput.

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Sara Kendrick

August 18, 2024 at 10:26 AM

Delightful to see your nursery rhyme on the winners' list. Way to go. Congratulations to you. Sara K

Paula Goldsmith

October 5, 2024 at 10:11 AM

Thanks for your note and for your Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed reading my fun "Big Foot" write again. "So Sorry" I do Not know how I missed your wonderful comment. It is always great to see you. Have a fun day writing away.................

Paula Goldsmith

August 18, 2024 at 8:41 AM

"1 Place" ~ Watch Out Big Foot ~ Date Written: 7/26/2024

Len Gasun

August 17, 2024 at 8:24 PM

Coming back to Congratulate you on your first place win my dear poet friend! Hugs

Paula Goldsmith

August 18, 2024 at 8:41 AM

Thanks for your note and for your Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed reading my "Big Foot" write again. It is always great to see you. Hugs... Have a fun day writing away.................

Mark Toney

August 15, 2024 at 9:39 PM

Yours is a lovely nursery rhyme, Paula. It’s the bees knees! :) I also wanted to write one for the cute little apple house under foot, but I just couldn’t come up with anything. It’s a delight to read yours.

Paula Goldsmith

August 18, 2024 at 8:39 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you found my fun "Big Foot" write to be a lovely nursery rhyme. I started thinking very small. Ants first came to mind but I did not like the ant idea. Then bees came. That is what I went with. So glad you found it to be a delight to read. Watch out "Big Foot." Have a fun day writing away..........................

Karen Jones

August 15, 2024 at 5:48 PM

Congratulations on your win in the contest

Paula Goldsmith

August 18, 2024 at 8:34 AM

Thanks for your note and for your Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed reading my "Big Foot" write. It was a ton of fun to bring to life. Have a fun day writing away...........................

Speaks Volumes

August 8, 2024 at 3:47 PM

This nursery rhyme should become a classic Paula. Bees are such meligned critters and kids are usually terrified of them. This is a lovely tribute to make kids love bees. Its gorgeous!

Paula Goldsmith

August 9, 2024 at 9:29 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you found my fun "Big Foot" write to be a lovely tribute to make kids love bees. Its gorgeous! Great to see you/to know you enjoyed my fun write. I could not get the picture to load in. It was so much fun to write. Watch out "Big Foot." Have a fun day writing away..........................

Nancy Kaufman

August 3, 2024 at 1:17 PM

Paula this is a really cute one. Enjoyed it!

Paula Goldsmith

August 4, 2024 at 1:30 PM

Thanks for your note. Glad you found my fun "Big Foot" write to be a really cute one. It was fun to write. Watch out "Big Foot." Have a fun day writing away...........................

Linda Alice Fowler

July 31, 2024 at 3:05 PM

LOL. What a fun story Paula. We must watch our step lest we squash the little critters in the grass. :)

Paula Goldsmith

August 1, 2024 at 9:39 AM

Thanks for your note and for your LOL. Glad you found my fun "Big Foot" write to be a fun story. I enjoyed writing this one. Yes, we must watch our steps in the grass. We never know who lives there. Hahaha!!! Watch out "Big Foot." Have a fun day writing away...........................

Valsa George

July 28, 2024 at 10:23 PM

Quite an amusing nursery rhyme. The Big Foot is a real threat to the existence of small flies like bees. Beautiful rhyming. Enjoyed it, dear Paula.

Paula Goldsmith

July 30, 2024 at 9:49 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you found my fun "Big Foot" write to be Quite an amusing nursery rhyme. I thought the bees were cute for the apple picture contest. Yes, watch out "Big Foot." Hahaha!!! Have a fun day writing away...........................

Len Gasun

July 28, 2024 at 7:41 PM

A delighhtful and gorgeous rhyme poem my dearest poet friend Paula. I enjoyed immensely reading it this morning. Thanks a lot for sharing. Sorry for the late visit. I hope you're always doing great dearest friend. Have a great new week! Best wishes to you always. Hugs.

Paula Goldsmith

July 30, 2024 at 9:45 AM

Thanks for your note and for your Best wishes. Glad you found my fun "Big Foot" write to be A delightful and gorgeous rhyme poem. Good to see you here. You are never late, right on time. I thought the bees were cute for this apple picture contest. Have a fun day writing away...............

Hilda Greenhough

July 27, 2024 at 12:54 PM

If I were a bee, I'd be sad reading this; however, bees are skilled at building anew. Thanks for this cute poem.

Paula Goldsmith

July 30, 2024 at 9:41 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you found my fun "Big Foot" write to be a cute poem. Yes, bees are very skilled at building. They would never use an apple for their home. I thought it was cute for the picture contest. Have a fun day writing away...............

Ink Empress

July 27, 2024 at 9:18 AM

I love the rhymes and rhythm of your cute and very creatively written poem dear paula! Fitting for the picture too.. I especially love the ending here. Brilliant! Best wishes and pleasure always reading your work. Sending you light always

Paula Goldsmith

July 30, 2024 at 9:38 AM

Thanks for your note and for your Best wishes. Glad you found my fun "Big Foot" write to be very creatively written. I see "Brilliant"??? Thank You, that put a smile on my heart. Have a fun day writing away...............

Andrea Dietrich

July 26, 2024 at 11:38 PM

Cute take on the picture, dear.

Paula Goldsmith

July 30, 2024 at 9:34 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you found my fun "Big Foot" write to be a Cute take on the picture. Watch out "Big Foot." Hahaha!!! Have a fun day writing away...............

Sara Kendrick

July 26, 2024 at 1:45 PM

A little humor there to go along with the picture. Enjoyed reading it today. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara K

Paula Goldsmith

July 30, 2024 at 9:33 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed reading my "Big Foot" write. It was a ton of fun to bring to life. Have a fun day writing away...........................

Anne-Lise Andresen

July 26, 2024 at 1:39 PM

- A pleasure to read ... be careful "big foot" - GL in the contest, Paula :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith

July 30, 2024 at 9:31 AM

Thanks for your note and for your GL in the contest. Glad you found my fun "Big Foot" write to be A pleasure to read. Yes, watch out "Big Foot." Hahaha!!! Good to see you. Hope you are OK... Hugs... Have a fun day writing away...............

Silent One

July 26, 2024 at 12:38 PM

They rhymes and flow to this are really good.. Great idea for a poem..Have a lovely day writing..

Paula Goldsmith

July 30, 2024 at 9:28 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my "Big Foot" write. I enjoyed bringing this one to life. Have a fun day writing away...........................

Joseph May

July 26, 2024 at 11:33 AM

I enjoyed this fun verse Paula, blessings

Paula Goldsmith

July 26, 2024 at 12:15 PM

Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Big Foot" write. I had a ton of fun writing this one. Have a fun day writing away...........................

Darlene De Beaulieu

July 26, 2024 at 11:19 AM

Hello Paula, yes bigfoot will crush the tiny home of the bee. /Enjoy your day my friend. Hugs. /Darlene/

Paula Goldsmith

July 26, 2024 at 12:13 PM

Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my "Big Foot" write. Yes, watch out... Do Not Crush The Tiny Home. Where would the bees move toooooo??? Hahaha!!! Have a fun day writing away...........................