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Wasn'T Me Mum Honest- - Tall Tale Contest

honest mum it wasn't me I didn't take a nibble of the cake it was just as I walked into the kitchen I saw something move....mum....I did ... was the biggest mouse you ever saw, it was stealthily moving towards the cake whiskers twitching, nose in the air I watched amazed then it pounced, you should have seen him jump, went at least a foot in the air and landed on top of the icing. lifted one foot then the other.... all stuck up with wet icing he began to nibble the cake, when icing dried he licked his feet clean and ran away, see mum, you can see his foot prints, wasn't me mum......honest. penned 5 may 2016.

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Date: 5/17/2016 8:30:00 AM
Just a nibble...to cute.. Enjoyed your tall tale, thanks for entering and grats on placing 4th :)
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Seren Roberts
Date: 5/19/2016 7:38:00 AM
Thx Casarah for liking and p!acing my poem..... Seren
Date: 5/5/2016 2:44:00 AM
lol made me smile Seren - I think many have found this 'mouse' in their house lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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