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"washed Away"

The shower water dances fast off my shoulders like little lies caught...

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/10/2012 9:04:00 PM

loving this one again...pd

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/12/2010 4:08:00 PM

(""you see the lies not escaping this one"") O' Michael all i meant is some lies are easy to dust off when caught. But, there are some lies that don't escape. :-)Will you be kind and share the meaning of your poem. I would really like to know!!!(CURIOSITY) , has gotten a hold of me with this poem now. Have yourself a wonderful Sunday,..p.d.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/11/2010 11:17:00 AM

Another rare beauty from your gifted pen Michael... enjoyed being washed away in your words..luv..

Hyle Chu

Date: 9/11/2010 10:59:00 AM

Great senryu, bro. Another day, another lie. Wash it away tomorrow. I like the idea.

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/11/2010 5:15:00 AM

Wow, I like that you incorporated the water as lies in your write.. Awesome metaphor Michael, love Wilma

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/11/2010 5:12:00 AM

Good morning Michael, how are you this beautiful lovely Saturday. No I have not forgotten about your delightful poetry. I had to make a stop on many poets, and I told myself I would make time for my favorites today.. LOL, By the way it was nice to see your comment so early this morning. About your poem, hummm! I kind of see the lies not escaping this one,,enjoyed,..p.d.