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Was With the Last Priest

One more wilted flower flutters slow in the breeze As the last priest prays soft down upon bended knees. Waiting at Heaven's gate with his heart filled with grief, Is the one once so lost in the guise of a thief. Lives were spent in labors according to a plan, One stole for his fortune, the other for the Man. Traveled hard and lonely, living from day to day, Each walked with the shadows in-between shades of grey. Final minute’s ticking through the bid for control, One last theft of future, one last word for the soul. With the prayer past ending and hands bleeding with shame, The thief and this last priest become one and the same.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/21/2012 12:32:00 PM
It was a pleasure to read your poetry this Monday afternoon Daniel. I wish you much inspiration that you may continue with your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Have a wonderful fun loving week and keep the old pen flowing. Love, Carol
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Daniel Larson
Date: 5/21/2012 6:56:00 PM
it is with great appreciation to receive wonderful comments from one such as yourself. kindest regards, daniel
Date: 5/20/2012 11:47:00 PM
Daniel, i like the feel of your poem... i think the image is very compelling,, and binds with a meaning that does not leave out the other... enjoyed.. stopping by tonight~xox~PD
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Daniel Larson
Date: 5/21/2012 6:53:00 PM
thanks so much for your wonderful comments, as usual they are full of light and joy. regards, daniel

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