Paula Goldsmith Poet Dizain

Was I Doomed

From our very first meeting was I doomed,  
I listened intently to your soft voice.                                                                                 The gift of pretty flowers were perfumed,                                                            a loving card came now I can rejoice.                                                               With this old friendship what should be our choice,                                     should we go on but is this hate or love.                                                                           Will we find the answer from up above,                                                                 like the pretty flowers you once did buy.                                                        Will you be leaving like a flying dove, 
what can I say should we just say good-by. 
 

Date Written: 2/1/2022 

3 Place

Forms - Dizain- Poetry Contest 
Sponsored by: Constance La France 
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Sotto Poet February 15, 2022 at 6:12 PM Congratulations on your outstanding win, Paula, you largely deserved it with your very well-penned poem. Kindest thoughts

Alexis Y. February 15, 2022 at 5:06 PM Hi Paul, You asked some good questions. Congratulations on a well-deserved win. Have a nice day- Alexis

Sam Kauffman February 15, 2022 at 11:39 AM Paula, congratulations on your win. Great questions that strike to the heart of a relationship. Hard decision! Blessings of comfort to you dear. Paula Goldsmith February 15, 2022 at 12:05 PM Thank You, for your note and for your congratulations. This win made my day. Glad you like this write "Was I Doomed." It is from many, many years ago. Have a great/blessed day writing away..................

Debra L Brown February 15, 2022 at 11:09 AM Congratulations!! on your win, Paula. Outstanding write. Blessings ~ Debra Paula Goldsmith February 15, 2022 at 12:02 PM Thank You, for your note and for your congratulations. This win made my day. Did I see, Outstanding??? Thanks. That was so kind of you to say. Glad you like my sad write "Was I Doomed." Have a great/blessed day writing away..................

Evelyn Judy Buehler February 15, 2022 at 11:01 AM It's sad when the perfumed flowers and loving cards stop coming. You have written a marvelous dizain, Paula. Congratulations on your win. Blessings, Evelyn Paula Goldsmith February 15, 2022 at 11:59 AM Thank You, for your note and for your congratulations. This win made my day. Glad you like this sad write. Have a great/blessed day writing away..................

Eve Roper February 14, 2022 at 8:07 PM Paula, a great heartfelt verse. Congratulations on your win in Constance's contest. Happy Valentin's Day :) Blessings my friend Paula Goldsmith February 15, 2022 at 8:10 AM Thank You, for your note and for your congratulations. This win made my day. I enjoyed writing it for Constance's contest. A late Happy Valentin's Day wish. Hope you have a great Valentin's Day. Have a great/blessed day writing away..................

Constance La France February 14, 2022 at 3:17 PM Paula, congratulations on your Third Place win in my D Form-Dizain contest with your wonderful poem ~ Constance Paula Goldsmith February 15, 2022 at 8:07 AM Thank You, for your note and for your congratulations. This win in your D Form-Dizain contest made my day. Thank You. I enjoyed writing it. Have a great/blessed day..................

Deb M February 2, 2022 at 2:32 AM Paula such a sweet poem tinged with sadness. Debx Paula Goldsmith February 2, 2022 at 8:25 AM Thanks for your note. A taste of life. Both sweet and sad in one. Have a blessed day................

Delice Arleen Skelly February 1, 2022 at 3:40 PM Loving card and flowers! Do not say goodbye…Delice Paula Goldsmith February 2, 2022 at 8:21 AM Thanks for your note. It is just a write. Have a blessed day................

Sotto Poet February 1, 2022 at 10:51 AM Your Dizain is perfectly crafted and reflects precisely the title you chose. Indeed we all have almost the same sensations when it comes to affection. I wish you good luck in the contest. Paula Goldsmith February 1, 2022 at 2:01 PM Thanks for your note and for your good luck. Glad you like this write. Have a blessed day................