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Was I Doomed

From our very first meeting was I doomed, I listened intently to your soft voice. The gift of pretty flowers were perfumed, a loving card came now I can rejoice. With this old friendship what should be our choice, should we go on but is this hate or love. Will we find the answer from up above, like the pretty flowers you once did buy. Will you be leaving like a flying dove, what can I say should we just say good-by. Date Written: 2/1/2022 3 Place Forms - Dizain- Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France Soup Syllable Counter

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Sotto Poet

Date: 2/15/2022 6:12:00 PM

Congratulations on your outstanding win, Paula, you largely deserved it with your very well-penned poem. Kindest thoughts

Alexis Y.

Date: 2/15/2022 5:06:00 PM

Hi Paul, You asked some good questions. Congratulations on a well-deserved win. Have a nice day- Alexis

Sam Kauffman

Date: 2/15/2022 11:39:00 AM

Paula, congratulations on your win. Great questions that strike to the heart of a relationship. Hard decision! Blessings of comfort to you dear.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/15/2022 12:05:00 PM

Thank You, for your note and for your congratulations. This win made my day. Glad you like this write "Was I Doomed." It is from many, many years ago. Have a great/blessed day writing away..................

Debra L Brown

Date: 2/15/2022 11:09:00 AM

Congratulations!! on your win, Paula. Outstanding write. Blessings ~ Debra

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/15/2022 12:02:00 PM

Thank You, for your note and for your congratulations. This win made my day. Did I see, Outstanding??? Thanks. That was so kind of you to say. Glad you like my sad write "Was I Doomed." Have a great/blessed day writing away..................

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 2/15/2022 11:01:00 AM

It's sad when the perfumed flowers and loving cards stop coming. You have written a marvelous dizain, Paula. Congratulations on your win. Blessings, Evelyn

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/15/2022 11:59:00 AM

Thank You, for your note and for your congratulations. This win made my day. Glad you like this sad write. Have a great/blessed day writing away..................

Eve Roper

Date: 2/14/2022 8:07:00 PM

Paula, a great heartfelt verse. Congratulations on your win in Constance's contest. Happy Valentin's Day :) Blessings my friend

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/15/2022 8:10:00 AM

Thank You, for your note and for your congratulations. This win made my day. I enjoyed writing it for Constance's contest. A late Happy Valentin's Day wish. Hope you have a great Valentin's Day. Have a great/blessed day writing away..................

Constance La France

Date: 2/14/2022 3:17:00 PM

Paula, congratulations on your Third Place win in my D Form-Dizain contest with your wonderful poem ~ Constance

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/15/2022 8:07:00 AM

Thank You, for your note and for your congratulations. This win in your D Form-Dizain contest made my day. Thank You. I enjoyed writing it. Have a great/blessed day..................

Deb M

Date: 2/2/2022 2:32:00 AM

Paula such a sweet poem tinged with sadness. Debx

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/2/2022 8:25:00 AM

Thanks for your note. A taste of life. Both sweet and sad in one. Have a blessed day................

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 2/1/2022 3:40:00 PM

Loving card and flowers! Do not say goodbye…Delice

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/2/2022 8:21:00 AM

Thanks for your note. It is just a write. Have a blessed day................

Sotto Poet

Date: 2/1/2022 10:51:00 AM

Your Dizain is perfectly crafted and reflects precisely the title you chose. Indeed we all have almost the same sensations when it comes to affection. I wish you good luck in the contest.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/1/2022 2:01:00 PM

Thanks for your note and for your good luck. Glad you like this write. Have a blessed day................