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Warriors Thoughts

While holding my M-16 in hand with a filled magazine
A canteen with water and camouflage green jeans
We engage the enemy with a M-79 grenade launcher
Regaining our position as VC fire becomes stronger

Nights filled with fear days the same with no end in sight
Dreams become nightmares with thoughts that ignite
Food out of boxes stores becoming only a memory
Weak from walking one boot at a time depleting our energy

Huey choppers with blades spinning landing to pick up the dead
Tears and anger blended together knowing what we face up ahead
Thoughts of home now faint only the death of a brother
Two hundred and three days left my mind is still in wonder

Will I live or die each day this crosses my mind in thought
I am back home writing this poem about a war we all fought

Contest: A Warriors Sonnet
Sponsored by: John Lawless
Date Created: 09/16/2020

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 9/16/2020 5:53:00 PM
Extremely passionate piece Bobby, very intense. I thank you and your service brothers & sisters for such personal sacrifice.
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Date: 9/16/2020 4:43:00 PM
I'm glad you made it home safely, Bobby. Your bravery is far greater than I think I could ever gather enough to fight in combat. Thank you for a first hand account.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/16/2020 5:16:00 PM
It should be safer. Hugs to you, Bobby.
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Bobby May
Date: 9/16/2020 4:48:00 PM
It's over now my only thought's now are poetry it's so much safer, lol

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