Warrior Unsheathed

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"O, Lord, make my enemies ridiculous. And God granted it. . . Voltaire
I grew up Ojibwe in a pure white world, my long black hair was straight and never curled; and I was bullied bad, inside it made me mad! Then one day I unsheathed my sharp sword, all the hurt and the sadness within poured; this brave warrior would not be ignored! My rapier bloody, I had not one buddy; my time was all study. There was no time to wallow in pity, it was a bloodstained battle not pretty; my only friend was with a black kitty. Yes, I grew up Ojibwe in a pure white world. My soul became blood-soaked from the fierce war, the haters returning again for more; I knew how to evade, and to parry my blade! The bullies were relentless and savage, my true essence they wanted to ravage; I waded a brutal battle to salvage, this shy Objibwe girl. On pages of white my words twirl, with my sword pen words I swirl; you see, I studied hard and my sword is words, I thrust them out but they fly away birds. A pen was the weapon I used on those nerds! Still, my soul is blood-soaked from that fierce war.
A quote by Micky Mantle "A gang is where a coward goes to hide."
________________________________ September 15, 2018 Poetry/Rhyme/Unsheathe Your Sword Copyright Protected, ID 18-4538-0915-01 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym.

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Date: 9/16/2018 8:12:00 AM
Sun, thanks for visiting my poem. In a way I did think of all the kids and even adults who are bullied when I wrote this poem. I hope they can see that if one young girl can rise above it so can they. Yet the scars are forever I chose to use that pain in my poetry.
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Date: 9/15/2018 6:22:00 PM
Powerful! I thought you wrote it on behalf of the bullied everywhere.
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Date: 9/15/2018 1:05:00 PM
Gordon, thank you for visiting my poem and commenting. I seldom get bothered by bullies anymore (although a few times of this site) but funny thing, I am here still holding my pen high and they are gone. So there you go! I am doing great.
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Date: 9/15/2018 12:59:00 PM
A brilliant penned piece Constance, fighting forth on the front foot showing your metal. Love your delicate rhyme and fine insight. Hope life's good with you, Blessings,Gordon
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