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Warrior Courage

What is a heart, Now that it is open; Freed of lies which so long Protected its tenderness. What is a heart, Wounded and pierced; A crippled bird Crying with fear. Where is the warrior courage, Where is the strength To complete the journey Of a life. Pain has been thrown off; Resistance has been overcome and cut away. Suffering has been released; Small, reassuring measures of the past No longer sustain. Old dreams have been set free Relieved of their hollow promises; Yet now there is emptiness And fear. What is a heart, now that it is open; Now that days of depression, And sunken pity, Have been released. Where is the saving shield; Where is the warrior’s courage. Seek as a child turns to God For love and compassion: Shield of salvation. Seek as a man turns to his Beloved, For truth and honor: Shield of courage. Wear that fine and terrible shield, Folded about as forgiveness, Held fast with acceptance, Radiant with the wisdom of ages. Let this be a warrior’s courage; A holy trust. Let it rise upon wings, Filling the open heart; Warrior’s courage, Face to face with destiny.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/16/2010 1:10:00 PM
Yeah from me to you! Thank you, Deborah. I think this turned out quite well also. All your help was wonderful.
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Date: 12/16/2010 12:47:00 PM
Taaadaaaaaaa universal message!!! YEAH!
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Date: 12/15/2010 5:27:00 PM
your advice is excellent. i am looking forward to tomorrow, when i will have time to re-write. please look for the improved version then. yes, the universal appeal of this poem will be far better than holding in a first person point of view. thank you, thank you. fine advice.
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Date: 12/15/2010 4:56:00 PM
getting there ;) Soup mail
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Date: 12/14/2010 2:57:00 PM
C. Henderson told me you may offer good advice on my writing, as has he. He said you are to be trusted. Thanks for the offer of protection, Shield Sister; I'll take it. I thought about putting in alliteration, actually had it in there and took it out. My first write is done with no punctuation, on paper. Then I go back and put it in. But I'm unclear on the metaphor advice. To be continued?...
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Date: 12/14/2010 2:52:00 PM
Shield Sisters we ;)...I have your back! Here you have some good bones, try inserting some alliteration & metaphor ;) Light & Love
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