Warped
La Forge was a big stud, a horse
with the ladies, a tour de force.
The action hot at his warp core:
He had them begging, "Jordi, more!"
(just on the holodeck, of course)
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Quintilla has a rhyme scheme of AABBA like a limerick, but iambic tetrameter on all lines (8 syllables). I don't think it reads quite as whimsically as a limerick, but that's just an opinion... You can also do an ABBAA with this form.
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