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Warpath Woman -

I need a woman who can dance on a diamond and who can curse on a candle with equal aplomb,I need a woman that can calm like a bomb,

I want a woman that can sew ginger stiches on a sad man's soul,I need a woman that can sing the sorrow sweet from unexpected defeat,

I need a woman I should trust like the sun,one that will find fun in the mud,carry a ton,laugh when its done,a lady that can rob a mob ,an old mom,

I want a woman that can slap a kid like shes petting a dog,one that speaks to spirits as though she was born in the fog,having eyes that compete,

I need a woman that can raze a nation,shun reservation,and raise the meek and weak to sublimation,a woman that could die with a smile,

I want a woman that can hug,shove & tug me,a fine lady that tells me " despite working for the world you are a king handsome & rude all the while "  -

J.A.B.  2008

Copyright © Justin Bordner | Year Posted 2012

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Kp Nunez Date: 10/24/2015 1:59:00 AM After days of checking and haven't found a new post from you, I decided to poke in your poem closet and found this, Justin. Made me smile. Any woman would be envious of anyone with these qualities! Loved how you wove the complexity, how soft and sturdy, young and ancient, - both her personality and character can be. I saw one of your replies and I'm happy to know you have found her, Justin. hugs! Login to Reply Justin Bordner Date: 10/24/2015 3:03:00 AM When you poke my heart I feel the pleasure of playful love Poetess. My warpath woman is complex like love reason, sturdy as love stone and soft like love on warm lips...J.A.B.

Verlena S. Walker Date: 9/16/2014 12:07:00 AM You the chief. Now go find your Warrior Justin? Rated 7.... Verlena Login to Reply Justin Bordner Date: 9/16/2014 2:07:00 PM There is a most beautiful warpath woman in my life now, unconventional and unconditional in her passion. So joyed by your response my friend of faith. J.A.B.

Eileen Manassian Date: 8/15/2014 6:12:00 AM Have you found her? Came back to read this...She must be an extraordinary woman to fit all these expectations, Justin. Then again...you are an extraordinary man. Login to Reply Justin Bordner Date: 8/15/2014 12:51:00 PM Providence led her to the door of my heart, and she pushes my soul around with soft hands, batting at my love like its a floating dandelion Eileen. Distance is painful. I'm just a beating heart like you Eileen...Justin

Casarah Nance Date: 7/9/2014 4:40:00 PM Well you don't ask for much at all! A great poem my friend, very interesting and pleasing to read, I hope you always find what you are looking for :) Login to Reply Justin Bordner Date: 7/9/2014 8:21:00 PM I admit Casarah, seek a super woman, a creature fierce and compassionate, seductive, sensitive, studious and steadfast, I need an extraordinary girl Casarah

Poet Destroyer A Date: 5/21/2014 1:13:00 PM soup mail Login to Reply

Eileen Manassian Date: 1/15/2014 2:09:00 PM Sure is a tall order.....She must be a goddess to fit the bill. Very interesting and unusual requirements, Justin. Fascinating.... Login to Reply Justin Bordner Date: 1/16/2014 1:20:00 AM Well Eileen, I need a dynamic woman, loyal and completely lovable. J.A.B.

Shirley Candy Date: 6/13/2013 4:37:00 PM Amazingly beautiful poem..!! If I am a man I will surely compete with you in search of women like this. I hope you've found her, Justin. Login to Reply Justin Bordner Date: 6/15/2013 2:09:00 PM Sometimes I have her close, sometimes She is far away Shirley - thanks for the tender respect - J.A.B. %

Laura Breidenthal Date: 8/20/2012 10:49:00 PM AHA! Glad I decided to read this! Awesome verse. Hope you have found that woman - and if not, I hope you find her soon. She's somewhere around here...hmmm....;) Enjoyed this today, among some other poems you have written. I like the speaking to spirits part. Is that weird to like? Haha. My captcha says: 666V....hm... I hope no one's too religious here. O_O Always, Laura Login to Reply Justin Bordner Date: 8/20/2012 11:33:00 PM Eagerly hunting for that woman whom will make me complete Laura - I think we need to respect spirits, to let them help us, like gaurdian angels - thanks so much my friend - 666 hasn't bothered me too much! J.A.B. %

Keith Bickerstaffe Date: 7/22/2012 4:41:00 AM Fine end-line and inner-line rhyming... speckled with assonance and alliteration and full of excellent phrasing. Great title! Best wishes, Keith Login to Reply Justin Bordner Date: 7/22/2012 10:52:00 AM Thanks for being a mentor Keith,to us all- you are a learned craftsman;thanks for sharing your expertise- J.A.B.

Poet Destroyer A Date: 7/22/2012 2:20:00 AM Justin, I don't know about a ballet stance.. but give me them diamonds and I will dance on them :-) I love your poem.. Your second and third lines are my favorite. I can smile when all is lost.. :-( (-: Here you have represented a powerful woman to love.. you have cradled my heart with this poem. Well Justin, I think the women you are searching for can be in many of us.. one way or another war has it path on us.. I'm glad all of the above is what influences a man in your stance. xox~ PD Login to Reply Justin Bordner Date: 7/22/2012 11:03:00 AM I have jewels for you P.D.- the only woman that I am capable of loving is supremely powerful- You undertand P.D.,thank you;I love your genius- J.A.B.

Elizabeth Wesley Date: 7/21/2012 7:31:00 AM Sounds like you crave excitement Justin; they are out there so don't give up. We all have our priorities and why shouldyour dreams not come true! :). Loved your visit and sweet comment! Login to Reply Justin Bordner Date: 7/22/2012 11:04:00 AM I can't afford to give up Elizabeth,the search is all I have - J.A.B.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/20/2012 10:58:00 AM are you sure you want an old mom? heehee. This is neat-O. Reminds me of that song I heard on the radio a year or two ago, where he sings about the kind of woman he wants! Using unusual images. Keep up your creative pen! Login to Reply Justin Bordner Date: 7/20/2012 11:44:00 PM I adore you humor Andrea- I need a woman that is in love with Life - I treasure you encouragement - I'll do my best to keep the fire going - J.A.B.

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/20/2012 4:12:00 AM Hope you find a woman like this in your well written poem Justin. - Welcome to P-Soup, hope you will have a lot of fun with poetry - oxox love Anne-Lise Login to Reply Justin Bordner Date: 7/20/2012 11:51:00 PM I'm so glad that you are stimulated by this piece - Poetry is my stance & my Soul, it is the breath of my heart and the justice of my mind - thanks for being kind - you look so very happy in you avatar Anne J.A.B.

Michelle Mac Donald Date: 7/20/2012 1:32:00 AM Oh, I'm sure she is out there whomping dragons while still taking moments in between to kiss and hug the children! Enjoyed reading this piece, Justin! Sounds like she might clunk you for being rude, but will love you just the same! Best wishes, Mikki Login to Reply Justin Bordner Date: 7/20/2012 11:55:00 PM My rudeness is just a symptom of my crudeness,but even this trait can lend creativity & care - I appreciate you whimsical comment Mikki - I can take a hit - thanks for your attention - J.A.B.