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When one is a free-spirited youth and adventure's plains he roams in vain mustn't be surprised when he gets old with the amount of collected pain! © Demetrios Trifiatis 12 August 2020

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Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/12/2020 5:05:00 AM

Profound observation, Demetrios! Awesome flower bouquet!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/12/2020 5:33:00 AM

Thank you my friend, Vijay for your kind words. Take good care and have a beautiful day.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/12/2020 4:42:00 AM

- When they are young and free ... old age is not in their thoughts ... and they will live "forever" :) - Great written, my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/12/2020 6:23:00 AM

Thank you so very much dearest, Anne-Lise for your gracious visit and comment. Hugs xx

Michael Tor

Date: 8/12/2020 2:53:00 AM

Advice that all new generations should follow Demetrios. Well thought of, and written my friend. Have a joyful day...

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/12/2020 3:13:00 AM

Michael, my friend, I am delighted to see you again. Thank you for appreciating my message. Hope some may listen. Blessings

Joanna Daniel

Date: 8/12/2020 1:53:00 AM

Truly said, a warning to us youngsters:)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/12/2020 2:33:00 AM

Would youngsters listen? You, of course do my dearest, Jo! Thank you. Hugs xxx

Jenish Somadas

Date: 8/12/2020 1:31:00 AM

lovely poetry.. Seems like an introspection.. crafted with experience of life.. Great write Demetrios..

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/12/2020 2:38:00 AM

Having lost both parents at a very early age: 10 and 14 I had to be very serious not to roam my friend, Jenish but I have seen many to roam in youth as many to suffer later in life. Thank you my friend Jenish for your lovely visit and comment.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/12/2020 1:30:00 AM

Wise words Demetrios, Anyone can be free spirited and enjoy lifes journey but careful planning is needed to ensure you don't meet obstacles down the line, the last thing you want is baggages of regret in your twilight years. Tom

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/12/2020 2:41:00 AM

Both being of almost the same age , my dearest friend, Tom, have seen a lot of that happening so it is our moral obligation to offer advice without forcing anyone to follow it although we would love to see them to follow it. Hope you have a great time my friend. Enjoy!