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Warning-Poisoned By Love

Dissolving death thru passionate eyes, I take one last breath before the guilty guise, buried alive before skies of grey, entombed immortal in loves betray. I drank the elixir of liquid desire, imprisoned by love with tangled wire, I fell from Olympus a god in exile, as I look for an escape resistance is futile. I am ++++ +++++ ++++ +++ +++++ ++++ ++++ +++++ +++ +++++ ++++++ ++++ bones petrified shedding dust from a black veil bride frozen in time and +horrified +++++ +++++mortified.+ recycled dreams +silent screams a demons den + a rusted pen +reliving death again+ a thousand devils wide where skulls do reside. ++ ++ ++ ++ ++ ++ ++ ++ ++ ++ ++ ++ ++ ++ ++ ++++++ ++++++ +++++++ +++++++ ++++++++ ++++++++ ++++++++ ++++++++ ++++++ ++++++ ++++++ ++++++ ++++++ ++++++ ++++++ ++++++ +++++ +++++ +++++ +++++ ++++ ++++ ++++ ++++ +++ +++ +++ +++ +++++++ ++++++ ++++++ ++++ ++++ ++++ ++++ ++++ ++++ ++++ ++++ ++++ ++++ +++++ +++++ +++++ +++++ ++++++ ++++++ ++++++ ++++++ ++++++ ++++++ ++++++ ++++++ ++++++ ++++++ ++++++ ++++++ +++++++ +++++++ ++++++ +++++ ++++ +++
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Date: 9/25/2018 9:03:00 PM
This is such a deep write, i like it heaps.
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Date: 8/31/2018 7:19:00 PM
Oh my goodness. I am so dense. I did not see it right away (the skull part) until I saw the whole picture with the crossbones. GREAT concrete poetry!!
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Date: 8/27/2018 1:04:00 PM
Interesting format, loved the poetic flow.
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Date: 8/27/2018 11:51:00 AM
Cool! What a picture, very fitting to the piece. How do you do that??? Best wishes WW...
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Date: 8/26/2018 2:01:00 AM
Yaay, celebrating life, despite words that betray. Shalom, shalom: May you win with this wonderful offering t LIFE. Anil
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Date: 8/26/2018 12:55:00 AM
Dark and very poetic, and the image is well put together, it must have been a quite painstaking process. Great write.
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Date: 8/25/2018 11:44:00 PM
Wow - amazing, WW. Bravo!
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Date: 8/25/2018 9:35:00 PM
Wow! Loaded with emotion most poetically saturated and delivered; a concrete one can and does feel. Love the writing. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Date: 8/25/2018 9:41:00 AM
Amazing WW! A stunning work of art. Well done :)
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Date: 8/25/2018 9:04:00 AM
This is beyond amazing, you are an artist! I can see a lot of thought and work went into this piece.
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