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Warning-Poisoned by Love

                                                 
                                             Dissolving death
                                     thru passionate eyes, I take
                               one last breath before the guilty guise,
                           buried alive before skies of grey, entombed
                          immortal in loves betray. I drank the elixir of
                          liquid desire, imprisoned by love with tangled 
                           wire, I fell from Olympus a god in exile, as I
                            look for an escape resistance is futile. I am
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                                   bones petrified shedding dust from
                                 a black veil bride    frozen in time and
                              +horrified +++++     +++++mortified.+
                                recycled dreams          +silent screams
                                  a demons den     +      a rusted pen
                                           +reliving death again+
                                           a thousand devils wide
                                           where skulls do reside.
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Aug.25.2018 Picture It Sponsored by: Maureen McGreavy Alice Cooper - Poison (Cover By Oriana Curls) N/A for contest

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Date: 9/25/2018 9:03:00 PM
This is such a deep write, i like it heaps.
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Date: 8/31/2018 7:19:00 PM
Oh my goodness. I am so dense. I did not see it right away (the skull part) until I saw the whole picture with the crossbones. GREAT concrete poetry!!
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Date: 8/29/2018 2:15:00 PM
Wow WW who is the real royalty here! Lol! You! Love it my friend !;) Hugs Brenda
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Date: 8/28/2018 2:19:00 AM
A superb, deep and powerful verse, WW. Great title. Best wishes for the contest. T.J
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Date: 8/27/2018 1:04:00 PM
Interesting format, loved the poetic flow.
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Date: 8/27/2018 11:51:00 AM
Cool! What a picture, very fitting to the piece. How do you do that??? Best wishes WW...
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Date: 8/26/2018 2:01:00 AM
Yaay, celebrating life, despite words that betray. Shalom, shalom: May you win with this wonderful offering t LIFE. Anil
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Date: 8/26/2018 12:55:00 AM
Dark and very poetic, and the image is well put together, it must have been a quite painstaking process. Great write.
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Date: 8/25/2018 11:44:00 PM
Wow - amazing, WW. Bravo!
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Date: 8/25/2018 9:35:00 PM
Wow! Loaded with emotion most poetically saturated and delivered; a concrete one can and does feel. Love the writing. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Date: 8/25/2018 9:41:00 AM
Amazing WW! A stunning work of art. Well done :)
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Date: 8/25/2018 9:22:00 AM
wow! very impressive! :)
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Date: 8/25/2018 9:04:00 AM
This is beyond amazing, you are an artist! I can see a lot of thought and work went into this piece.
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