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Warmth

warm rays of the sun penetrate the frigid air the snow takes notice

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/24/2025 4:33:00 AM

Inching in on Spring. Very nice…a little warmer for reading it.

Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 2/24/2025 4:38:00 AM

Thanks for reading Kim. Spring is slowly making its way here.

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 2/23/2025 5:30:00 PM

A very subtle message. It's a poem of nature's weather that is nice to read in February.

Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 2/23/2025 6:03:00 PM

Thank you Hilda. It gives hope that Spring is right around the corner.

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 2/23/2025 2:13:00 PM

Nice haiku!

Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 2/23/2025 2:33:00 PM

Thanks Abdullah.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/23/2025 10:51:00 AM

A really awesome last line on this one

Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 2/23/2025 11:14:00 AM

Thank you Andrea. Cant wait for spring

Terrell Martin

Date: 2/23/2025 8:17:00 AM

Beautiful thoughts! Nice Haiku reminding me to try my hand at this form as well. Cheers, Terrell

Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 2/23/2025 11:15:00 AM

Thank you Terrell. Haiku's are fun to write. Give it a shot.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/23/2025 7:37:00 AM

Good one. That must have been a very cold day. Sara K

Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 2/23/2025 11:15:00 AM

Thanks Sara. Yes it has been bitterly cold.

Karen Jones

Date: 2/23/2025 5:46:00 AM

I like the imagery!

Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 2/23/2025 11:15:00 AM

Thank you Karen