Warm Tears On Cold Stone

warm tears on cold stone alone, the work of grieving geese in formation

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John Michaels

Date: 7/10/2014 4:23:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Such a sad little poem...

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/26/2014 6:29:00 PM

Sad and poignant work that you have penned in so few works..Even in death the geese seem to say there is hope..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/22/2014 3:39:00 PM

a very interesting third line in this one, Barbara. Congrats for your win. I love reading poems like this.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/22/2014 10:05:00 AM

Congratulations on the fine win for your latest poem, barbara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/22/2014 7:42:00 AM

- Nice to read your "Latest Poem" in the contest sponsored by: Leonora Galinta :) - CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WIN, BARBARA ! - Will also wish you an enjoyable weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun

Date: 3/22/2014 7:04:00 AM

Congratulations on this great write and win my dear friend Barbara. I thoroughly enjoyed reading your precious gem. Thank u so much for sharing and your loving support in my contest. Big warm hugs! Love lots, Leonora

Skat A

Date: 3/20/2014 12:29:00 PM

a fine haiku.... SKAT

David Mohn

Date: 3/19/2014 5:10:00 PM

Really introspective and visual...great Barbara

M. L. Kiser

Date: 3/19/2014 4:55:00 PM

Wow, a powerful little haiku.