Eve Roper Poet Pantoum

Warm Sunset

Sunset sky was like a fiery red flame
Swarms in artfulness swirls and whorls and drawn 
Glorious heavenly feelings breeze came
Narrow wake trailing off with morning dawn.

Swarms in artfulness swirls and whorls and drawn 
Wistful caress entrails tangled brushwood
Narrow wake trailing off with morning dawn.
A crimson rose bud in safe caress stood

Wistful caress entrails tangled brushwood
Glorious heavenly feelings breeze came
A crimson rose bud in safe caress stood
Sunset sky was like a fiery red flame


1/27/2021

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Aniruddha Pathak June 25, 2021 at 11:48 PM Beautifully crafted Pantoum and a lesson for me for a new form (to me), thanks dear Eve Roper

Anisha Dutta June 10, 2021 at 9:08 AM An Amazing Sunset in Pantoum form. You are fond of Pantoum Form as well as hold expertization. Congrats

Reason A. Poteet June 2, 2021 at 1:52 PM Most unusual sunset, Eve. A visceral piece swarming with its whorls and entrails contrasted with the loveliness of the rose's narrow escape, untouched. Excellent example for your pantoum contest.

Regina Mcintosh May 19, 2021 at 3:00 AM Wonderful example, Eve. Lovely writing. God bless you always, Love, Gina

Constance La France May 17, 2021 at 2:53 PM Eve, beautiful and a great example for you contest, hope I can pen a poem worthy, love _Constance

Alexis Y. January 28, 2021 at 2:35 PM WoW! Eve, You painted such a beautiful picture with words. Just breathtaking:-) Alexis

Victor Buhagiar January 27, 2021 at 11:19 PM You are the master of pantoums. Very delightful. ~~