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Warm Sunset

Sunset sky was like a fiery red flame
Swarms in artfulness swirls and whorls and drawn 
Glorious heavenly feelings breeze came
Narrow wake trailing off with morning dawn.

Swarms in artfulness swirls and whorls and drawn 
Wistful caress entrails tangled brushwood
Narrow wake trailing off with morning dawn.
A crimson rose bud in safe caress stood

Wistful caress entrails tangled brushwood
Glorious heavenly feelings breeze came
A crimson rose bud in safe caress stood
Sunset sky was like a fiery red flame


1/27/2021

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Aniruddha Pathak Date: 6/25/2021 11:48:00 PM Beautifully crafted Pantoum and a lesson for me for a new form (to me), thanks dear Eve Roper Login to Reply

Anisha Dutta Date: 6/10/2021 9:08:00 AM An Amazing Sunset in Pantoum form. You are fond of Pantoum Form as well as hold expertization. Congrats Login to Reply

Reason A. Poteet Date: 6/2/2021 1:52:00 PM Most unusual sunset, Eve. A visceral piece swarming with its whorls and entrails contrasted with the loveliness of the rose's narrow escape, untouched. Excellent example for your pantoum contest. Login to Reply

Regina Mcintosh Date: 5/19/2021 3:00:00 AM Wonderful example, Eve. Lovely writing. God bless you always, Love, Gina Login to Reply

Constance La France Date: 5/17/2021 2:53:00 PM Eve, beautiful and a great example for you contest, hope I can pen a poem worthy, love _Constance Login to Reply

Alexis Y. Date: 1/28/2021 2:35:00 PM WoW! Eve, You painted such a beautiful picture with words. Just breathtaking:-) Alexis Login to Reply

Victor Buhagiar Date: 1/27/2021 11:19:00 PM You are the master of pantoums. Very delightful. ~~ Login to Reply