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Warm Sunset

Sunset sky was like a fiery red flame Swarms in artfulness swirls and whorls and drawn Glorious heavenly feelings breeze came Narrow wake trailing off with morning dawn. Swarms in artfulness swirls and whorls and drawn Wistful caress entrails tangled brushwood Narrow wake trailing off with morning dawn. A crimson rose bud in safe caress stood Wistful caress entrails tangled brushwood Glorious heavenly feelings breeze came A crimson rose bud in safe caress stood Sunset sky was like a fiery red flame 1/27/2021

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Date: 6/25/2021 11:48:00 PM
Beautifully crafted Pantoum and a lesson for me for a new form (to me), thanks dear Eve Roper
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Date: 6/10/2021 9:08:00 AM
An Amazing Sunset in Pantoum form. You are fond of Pantoum Form as well as hold expertization. Congrats
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Date: 6/2/2021 1:52:00 PM
Most unusual sunset, Eve. A visceral piece swarming with its whorls and entrails contrasted with the loveliness of the rose's narrow escape, untouched. Excellent example for your pantoum contest.
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Date: 5/19/2021 3:00:00 AM
Wonderful example, Eve. Lovely writing. God bless you always, Love, Gina
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Date: 5/17/2021 2:53:00 PM
Eve, beautiful and a great example for you contest, hope I can pen a poem worthy, love _Constance
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Date: 1/28/2021 2:35:00 PM
WoW! Eve, You painted such a beautiful picture with words. Just breathtaking:-) Alexis
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Date: 1/27/2021 11:19:00 PM
You are the master of pantoums. Very delightful. ~~
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